This is a story based on my rp,The Apprentice Family RP.It is about what happened the first day of his research and how it affects himself and the other members.Okay then here it is.Chapter 1 of Braig's First Day. _______________________________________________________________ Master Ansem sighed as he entered the final room that was meant for one of his soon to be new apprentices.He had finished preparing the other five rooms,now he just had to finish this last room before he could go and get ready to welcome the new apprentices.As quickly,but neatfully as he could,he gave the room a good dusting before putting away all the clothing,making the beds,sorting the accessories,and making double checks to make sure everything was there. Smiling with satisfaction,Ansem made to leave the room only to stop to look out the window.He could see the dark clouds looming in the sky,moving quickly with the wind.A storm was coming,which meant at least a couple of the new apprentices would make it before the storm broke out,and arrive earlier than expected.Ansem quickly left the room,making haste to the bottom floor before any of the new apprentices showed up. ~~~Chapter 1~~~ It was the first day for this new apprentice.Braig had been invited by Ansem The Wise to participate in a research project that needed lots of exceptional good citizens to partake in.The letter had informed that there would be rooms for each person that came and that there would be no need in bringing clothes,accessories,or anything of that nature to take to the lab. He got out of the house that early morning and was heading for the lab.On his way there he saw that there were stormy clouds coming his way towards the lab in which he was going to.Braig hated rain and decided to run there instead.He ran past the shops,the construction,and finally past the mountain cliffs,until he reached a castle.He read the sign next to the entrance that read,'All fellow citizens who have been invited please go to the bottom floor for further instructions.'He nodded andwent inside. When he went inside,he saw various stairs and hallways that lead to different floors and rooms.He began to search around to see if there was a sign or something that could tell him where to find the bottom floor.He looked to his left and then looked to his right.Nothing.He continued his way up until he saw a little sign that marked left.He nodded and went to his left until he found several more signs. It took him several minutes until he came across a sign that read,'Bottom Floor'. He was relieved after finally finding the right floor.He stopped and looked up.Infront of him stood big brown doors with very unique designs on it.Braig quessed it was the entrance to where he would find Master Ansem.He was right.He pushed the doors open and before he knew it,he was in another hallway,and infront of that hallway stood Master Ansem himself.
This story needs more luv... ♥ The description is very good, even though it's so short. Can't wait to see more! ^-^
It DOES need more love. lol. It was very short, and lacked the superior grammar techniques of "Braig's Gift" but it was still very good. The descriptions were great. I can't wait to read more.
I enjoyed reading your story, I can't wait to read what happens next! Um, I still think I liked Braig's Gift more than this one. lol
Even is not a girl and Ienzo looks fine in the sig.As for the story I just wrote it just to make it clear,but it is not as better as my first.I like both of the stories that I wrote.Thank you all for the comments,I appreciate it.
