Bleeding Hearts

A diamond in
the rough
is the rarest of
them all.
the joining hands
bleeding together
lasting forever.
The imprint of life
on your sinning hands.

Lonely as a wolf.
Isolated in a a claustrophobic
world.
Never to break free. Never to
spread your wings. Never to
think. or feel.
The feeling of
comatose is
Nirvana.
Yet we never reach it.

I know it's a bit dark, but yeah i wrote this about last year..so what do you guys think? *Hides under rock*

 

I liked it.Very well written.I can tell you put a lot of thought into this.It may sound dark but I liked it.
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Thank you, im glad you liked it :)

 

You should put this in the Original Work section, but it's still great. I can see you've put lots of work in it.

 

How do i move it?

 

You can ask one of the mods to move it for you.You can ask Rosey since she's in charge of this area of the site.​

 

Thanks! i'll ask her then