Lol...Mine is sooo much better than yours (avi wise D: ) So like, is she supposed to have funneh tatto's?
Working on the curves I see, good job, good job! 8D You've improved!! ;) This is a really good one, Hissora, and quite accurate to what the Gaia avatars look like. I must say that her curvy waist is really appealing, and I love how you've added thesmall pencil details to her. The structure of her face is really nicely done, and her neck and shoulders look amazing, though the shoulders could've extended out a bit more . . . but I cannot criticize you on that because it's the avatar, not you. Her proportions are good, so I won't really say much on that, but work on it more often to perfect it. I cannot blame you for any proportion mishap here, again because it's the avatar, and not you. However, what I would have you do was to fix any proportion mishap yourself that you'd find problematic and also add the extra depth for yourself. She looks amazing as is, but you should've gone ahead and added shading to her and given her more of a 3D look. Improvise, you know? Make her your own even if she was not something you thought of [technically, you did, but you know what I mean. :)]. So yeah, there you have it. But the only thing bugging me is her left arm . . . looks like you sort of slacked off at the end there. LOL, but it's not a big deal. Other than that, I think the only thing I'll rant about is that fact that you didn't shade it to add the 3D-ness and did not make her your own. Well, otherwise, thumbs up, good luck and keep practicing.
First thing's first, wtf is that signature...? XD Her collarbone looks too lowdown and her left shoulder is sorta missing. Otherwise it's rockin', like Pryo said I'd shade it for volume.
That little text or picture you have under your comments... Let's get back on thread: Mweh... it looks okay, but I still seen better...
