BEEP BEEP BEE- the alarm clock instanly stoped as roxas smash it with his keyblade and looked at his spare clock "who set my alarm to 2 in the morning oh ya demxy" "oh you know i had a good reason for doing it" said demxy out of no where roxas jumped strait out of bed and hit demxy on the head with his keyblade "ow that hurt come on xemnas has called a meeting" "ok just get out so that i can get some sleep" in the lounge the 13 members of organization began "as you know we have aquired a new castle -castle oblivion- as such the following shall acompaniy me to try it -saix, leaxus, xaldin, luxord, vexen, and marlexe the rest of you shall stay here and please try not to burn down another section of the building like last time" xemas said the others sincerd they had only been trying to make some toast and over did it. the seven organization members opend doors of darkness and vanished "ok said roxas who here is going back to sleep?" everyone raised their hands "i knew it"
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