I don't like the Preface. I kinda want to punch my self in the face. I hate it, I hate it! It was just going to be a short stroy...but it seemed to grow a mind of it's own.....Hope you guys like it. MORE TAO!! DISCLAMER: ME DON"T OENS BLACK CAT OR THE CHARACTERS IN IT!!! (The manga rulez XD) Ba-thump, ba-thump I see blood run off huis hands. He just smiles at me like nothing happened. "I guess I really screwed up this time." The man said. His head laid in my lap. Ba-thump, ba-thump. "Please don't die, please." I pleaded. Now the blood stained his green hair, the wound acroos his face and chest were really deep, and really bad. "I don't know about that. I'm sorry." Grabbing my hand, he kissed it, and he held as tightly has he could. Ba-thump, Ba-thump. I watched his eyes go dull. "Eve, please don't forget me." "Sven, please, no." I looked at Train. I could tell he was trying to hide his tears, but they shone in the moonlight. Secertly, I hoped he could do something, but he's just human. I looked back at Sven. His eyes were closed and he looked peaceful. Now what? Later.... Vroooom! The sound of a car driving woke me up. When I opened my eyes, I saw the roof of the yellow buggy. Still drowned in my sleepyness, I think I said something causing the person up front to chuckle. "Huh?" I slightly jumped. My gaze made me think I saw Sven. "What are we doing?" "Just moving to the next town." The voice didn't match the face. I rubbed my eyes a few times. "Oh......It's you." Looking out the window the grass whizzed by. The sun was half up, pecking through the hils in the distance hill. Train glared through the rearveiw mirrior. "Yeah, it's me." I ignored him and hugged my kness to my chest. "We're almost there. This is the next target. Shawn Hankins, worth 2 grand." "train....what are we going to do now?" The question periced the air. I held my breath, afrid of the anwser. "We have to move on. Can't live in the past forever." Not the anwser I wanted. "Well you did that before." I grumbled. Lying down, I drifted back to sleep. This is like a teaser. Chapter 1: Silent Tears will be up tomorrow. I already have Chapter 2 almost done.
Ok, life got in the way. I don't know what happened. But here's chapter 1 is here! Chapter 1: Silent Tears"Come on, Princess, wake up!" Train shoke me violently. "Wake up! We got to move!" "Mmm." I opned one eye. "What time is it?" "Um....4:50....1." He looked at the clock opposite of my bed. I wiggle my fott out of the sheet, and kicked his butt. "HEY! What was that for?" Train half shouted. "It's to early!" I half shouted back. I pulled the pillow over my plae face and tried to go back to sleep. "No, don't go back to sleep!" Yanking of the covers, he dragged me out of bed. "Train, this is ridiculous! Lets me go back to sleep!" I screamed even louder. I hooked my left foot around his angle and pulled really hard. Train hit his head on the floor and yelped in pain. I quickly climed in bed and lied down. "Somethimes, I think you're nothing wihtout Sven." I heard butthead groan. Tears formed in my eyes, and fall down my checks. "you might be rihgt." I mumbled back. ♦♥♦
I did see a few spelling words... Hm... maybe a bit more discription... I'm a little lost on what the story is really about... Seriously, I am. o.O But other then that, you have a good start my friend. ^^
