Traditional Art [Bella]{&}(Jacob)~4ever~

I really do like this drawing but i know i've messed up in some places

CnC Please =D

 

The faces and hair are fine, but the bodies are very flat. The arms should be rounded off, it helps to start with a base of an oval shape to get the curves of the arm in the right spots. The necks could be made shorter and thinner. Try to find referances for the anatomy of males and females to get all the body shapes and sizes right. The hands are very flat, too much like cardboard. From the perspective you drew this, the thumbs should be in front, with the fingers following behind and seeing less and less of the fingers farthest back. The noses are a bit off, the girl's should be smaller and the boy's larger. Try adding some more shading and detailing to the hair- make it look less of a chunk and more of pieces or separate sections.

 

K firstly, I wana mention that it's a job well done. :D

Now for the critique, I noticed the arms are a bit "thick" and the sleeves are a bit bland. Try to add a few wrinkles on their shirt to put a more "fabricy" effect and make the size of the arms a bit smaller for the guy. Also, the hair on the guy's left side is solid while hair is more free. And the nose proportions are a bit off as the guy's nose is supposed to be bigger than the girl's.

Other than that, I don see much problems.

 

ZOMG! Now I will go and draw Edward and Bella! >DD

But here's the thing, the hair looks cool, and the eyes. it's the bodies that bug me. There not, like 'out enough' like there lifeless is all. I think you should put more detail into there cloths and show a little shadow in the backround? Then THERE! it's all good and perfect!

BTW, awesome job! I LOVE IT! :3

 

Hey lovie!!
I love how cute Bella looks; nice job on the face (:
I would also like to point out the coloring is very nice+even. Props to you for that, I suck at it XD

Her hair is also awesome; just work on the chest area. If she has one, I am not familiar with the character.
Anyway, can't wait to see what is next<3