Digital Art Before the Dawn

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Chad Thundercucc, Aug 13, 2008.

  1. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Yeah. I haven't made a sig in about a month. Here it is. Go easy on me.

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    Chad Thundercucc, Aug 13, 2008
    Chad Thundercucc, Aug 13, 2008
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  2. on mirrors edge Traverse Town Homebody

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    the flow is terrible, try making your own background with that c4d as an overlay....
    the colors dont match, the background is purple while the render is mostly blue, try for cooler colors....
    V1 is too blurry, try a sharpen on it
     
    on mirrors edge, Aug 13, 2008
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  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    It's waaay to blury. Sharpen it up and play the levels and contrast and there's no rea flow. Also, there's not any effects. The background really doesn't go with the render at all, and the placement for the render really isn't that great.
     
    GhettoXemnas, Aug 13, 2008
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