Beautiful Anathema

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  1. Mixt The dude that does the thing

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    You were righteous and wise
    Yet you became despised
    Even hands washed in blood
    Could not defy the flood
    The burden that you bare
    Is one that can't be shared
    Your love on the alter
    Your will does not falter
    By friends you're forsaken
    From this world you're taken
    Soul bathed in pure crimson
    Most holy of treason
    Beautiful Anathema

    I think this might be my first poem that I ever wrote simply because I wanted to. All comments and criticisms are welcome.