Guilty Gear ♥ Just made this to pass the time while waiting for someone to call me. Original for comparison.
Really good dude, I like the coloring and lighting, and to be honest, this is a better job than alot of manga out there.
You always make pretty things and it really inspires me and stuff. /Kelly is lame. This is lovely, anyhow. The coloring and lighting are just rjgvtnyhgty6h; argh. Anyway, it's super pretty. I'll shut up now.
I really like this one, but you shouldn't have faded him out in the center like that. It feels so weird to have the center of gravity be faded out. Try a tiny bit more contrast? Contrast seems to be a big thing with me lately.