heres ch 2 of my first fanfic--please leave any comments below, or PM me!:D -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was him, Ansem. But no one believed; everyone knew what happened to him and the King. It happened there or four years back, before the war was like this. Ansem and the King had been uninformed of the war because of the new walls surrounding the worlds. Ansem was experimenting with a new way to travel to the other worlds so Sora and Riku could see their friends again. But something went terribly wrong. Ansem was so obsessed with making his goal and so close to his success, that he overlooked a small variable and caused his experiment to backfire. Instead of traveling to a world, the ship went berserk and crash landed on the Disney castle courtyard, and soon exploded. The force of the shock sent the world into total chaos; fiery explosions, deep fissures, and strong winds, the world literally tore itself apart. And yet, there he was, standing right in front of them, but he looked almost like an alternate person. He had a totally different face, deep scars, darker skin, and a bloodshot eye. He was dressed in his garments that he wore when he was pretending to be DIZ, minus the bandages on his head, but still, the garments were ripped, torn, and faded. He looked terrible. Everyone just looked at him, most unbelieving, others questionable. “Who are you?†said Sora softly, since they had been without supplies for so long and the lack of water was getting to him. A soft rumbling could be heard in the distance, but the party of seven just ignored it; there had been so much more of it the closer they got to enemy lines. “Sora, you know who I am, I am Ansem.†Everyone stared. Sora glared loathingly at him, already planning out a strategy in his head, need they fight. “ANSEM IS DEAD! NOW, ANSWER THE QUESTION! WHO ARE YOU?!†yelled Riku. Ansem just smiled, and said “Riku, you sound terrible. Here, I brought food and water.†He held out some bread and water. They all stared at it longingly, wondering if it would be poisoned, but their mouths were watering, and their throats, bone-dry. Even Riku couldn’t help but wish he had something to eat and drink, he looked around, Kairi was slowly extending her hand… ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ill post ch.3 ASAP
Good and all, but you should have posted it with your last chapter. You should ask to have it moved into the other thread and have this one deleted.
