Azul Rozeas (Blue Roses) A Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction.

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  1. tifaxrikuforever Destiny Islands Resident

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    Ummm hi there. Yup So I've been working on this story well I did it during winter break and haven't been able to complete or write more. But please tell me what you guys think.
    Oh and also. To be perfectly honest. I had a dream which inspired me to write this.
    yay prelude!!! Lol
    Please enjoy (well that is if you like it =) )




    Azul Rozeas
    Prelude

    Someone once said, ‘Life is full of surprises’ all I have to say is that, that man was right. No matter how drunk, high, or infused with heroine he was, he is correct. Just like the other who said that ‘Life is a *****’ one of my most favorites of them all, but with my situation, life is more of a surprising ***** rather than one of the sayings itself. You’d think that I am considered one of the cursed, or unlucky, but…you’re wrong…



    Chapter 1. The Unexpected Surprise.

    “Another flapjack on a Sunday special!†the waitress rang out to the chef, though everyone already heard. People chattered, drank the morning cup of Joe, and enjoyed their platters of a homestyle restaurant made breakfast.
    “Mmm, how delicious!†the girl chirped taking a bite of her chocolate chip pancake. “Thank you once again Deajonique!†she said in her bite.
    “No problem, you know you’re my girl!†a tall woman said holding a pot of fresh coffee. She had thin braids, a slender hourglass figure, and light brown skin. She wore a cloud pink dress, a white apron layering on top, along with white and red polka dotted flats. “Good luck with you’re exam today Lockheart†She mockingly teased, giving a wink. The russet-haired girl rolled her eyes playfully “Yeah and good luck with getting generous tips with that attitude.†She sweetly said with a wicked smirk.
    “Ohh, I’ll remember that next time.†The waitress said between a laugh and a teeth showed smile.
    “Whatever!†the young girl said putting on her jacket and heading out the door. “See you later!â€
    “You too mai little *****!†she jokingly yelled back.

    Okay I’m ready for this exam, I’m ready, I’ve studied, I’ve practiced, and I’ve researched. I’m prepared! The girl into deep thought had been worried and stressed, hoping to pass. She walked in the cold, the clouds gloomy, sun hidden, streets busy, and little shops hard at work.
    I just know I’ll pass, c’mon I need this, please! Okay just relax, don’t stress too much and hope to God that I at least fini-
    Her thoughts interrupted by a slap on the back with the yell of her name.
    “Hey there Tifa! And how are WE today?†a bright, raven-haired young man said happily. “Hiii Zack, I’m ok, just stressed a bit.†She stated calmly. He gave a pout.
    “Ok? Why ok and stressed?†he inquired.
    “Because of my final exam today, its on my struggling subject: chemistry. Just what I need.†She frowned, grouching.
    “Aw don’t worry about it, you’ll pass. I just know that this little shortie here will pass, after all the things she does already just to get into a good college.†He teased giving her a noogie. She managed to escape from his grasp and shove him off. “Yeah, yeah, but who says that that will be enough?â€
    Zack pointed to himself, “I dooo!†he sang. Tifa smirked “Well, that’s just you.â€
    “And WHAT is that supposed to MEAN?!†he crossed his arms, arching a brow.
    “Hmmmm?!â€

    “I’m just sayin’†Tifa cockily said flopping out her arms.

    “BAHHHHH!†Zack hollered out like a five-year old. He may have been at six foot, have long, black, spiky hair, killer muscles along with a six pack, and incredible fighting skills. But he was still a child at heart, which may have been one of his big flaws at times.

    Tifa giggled, and wrapped an arm around his neck. “Now, now, does someone need a timeout?†she joked. “No…just some snow.†He said sadly. “Huh?†the girl thought aloud. A snowball being thrown in her face with that being said, she jumped back in surprise.
    “Zaaaack!†She pouted. The man only laughed and ran off making more snowballs. “No fair!!†she yelled running after him; kicking particles of snow in his direction. Their fight began. Tifa and many others may have not realized this, but Zack Fair’s way was more than an immature phase he chose to be in.




    “Ahh, finally! A relaxing moment of peace!†Miss Lockheart exhaled out, plopping onto the living room couch, kicking off the black Ugg boots. “Thank God I actually didn’t break under all of the stress today.†She said happily.
    The Lockheart household was a quiet place. Only occupied by three people. Tifa Lockheart; the seventeen-year old daughter, her father; Mr. Lockheart, and Kairi Uazachi; the sexed up teen and cousin.

    “HEY *****! PICK UP THE ****IN’ LAUNDRY ALREADY!†was heard throughout the house. Tifa cringed at the sound of her irritating, winy, high-pitched voice. This girl was only at the age fifteen, and she already thought that she was the mother of the home. Tifa rolled her eyes and bared with the annoying, redheaded brat. “Why my father had a faintest glittering thought that we could change this girl I have no idea†She murmured. The brunette unloaded laundry, and started a new load “Don’t worry Tifa, she’s misunderstood, she’s a good girl.†she mocked. “Ha! Hardly!†she hollered folding clothes of the ‘princesses’.

    “Watchu yellin’ bout’.†She called out walking into the room grabbing for a soda. Tifa continued on with her business “Just thinking aloud.†She said not making any eye contact to the girl. Kairi scoffed and rolled her eyes. “Whateva losa girl.†she spoke posing as a gangsta.

    “Oh and for you’re info Kai, talking like you’re apart of a gang in a short, pink, dress. Doesn’t hide the fact that you’re still a poser white girl.†Tifa calmly stated, walking upstairs with the clothes. Kairi gasped a bit only to frown and reply back “S-shut up you white trash! You’re just jealous!†she hollered.

    Hmm me, white trash? Who knows. The girl thought placing the clothes into her cousin’s drawers. Just glad that I don’t have to deal with her now! The brunette closed her eyes and smiled happily. Although her happy moment soon interrupted by the ringing doorbell.
    “Hey white trash, answer the damn door!â€
    “Sheesh! Such a hothead!†Tifa muttered, quickly escalating down the stairs. “I wonder who is at the door? Especially at this hour.†Glancing at the clock, having read nine o clock p.m.

    Hm, possibly a Zack or bible thumper. She thought, nonchalantly opening the door. “Hu-wha-!†The brunette’s large wine eyes suddenly shrunk down in size, her body stiffened, and for a secound forgot to breathe. On the welcoming mat, in a bundle together was a small, newborn, sleeping baby. “B-ba-b-b-ab-by?†Tifa stuttered out. At first she was mindless on what to do till she knew that leaving a newborn baby sleeping out in the chilly, snowing night was not a thing to do. Certinly not! Miss Lockheart picked the baby up, careful not to wake it. Though this baby was a massive surprise, Lockheart couldn’t help but feel a sort of motherly happiness for that slight minute she held the little one in her arms. She took a look around, only to find the other homes in peace, and a new patch of snow heading it’s way. “Lets get inside.†She said.



    Thanks for reading! How did I do?
     
  2. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Hmmm...

    I liked it, just keep cussing at a minimal. It's still a Kingdom Hearts fanfic, right? :D I've seen the word 'Damned' in a soundtrack of KH, but that's still alright... I personally didn't like the words you used but it's your fanfic, don't let my good words ruin it! Good work, keep up :D