Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 7

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    Is this Axel’s not so Good Deed?

    Has Axel betrayed his best friends? Does he hurt innocent people? How can he stand to se it in his own front eyes?
    We shall see…

    Plus: Xemnas is the REALLY bad guy in this one.


    Chapter 7:

    Axel walked down the hall and saw Larxene. She seemed a bit upset. She had her arms crossed.
    “What’s wrong with you Larxene? You seem so down today,” Axel explained. She looked at him with sadness in her eyes.
    “I don’t know. I just have a bad feeling something awful is to happen,” Larxene said.
    “How do you know?” asked Axel.
    “I don’t, Zexion knows.” Larxene said.
    “Don’t listen to him, he’s just trying to creep you out,” Axel explained.
    Larxene put a smile on her face but her eyes were still sad.
    Axel walked on by Xemnas’ office and overheard him talking to Saix.
    “You know we got to do something about that. They’ve gone soft. We got to toughen them up a bit,” Xemnas said.
    Axel looked at the floor.
    “Have I really gone soft?” he asked himself. He ran up to Roxas who was at the end of the hallway.
    “Roxas, have I…uh… ya know…gone soft?” he asked.
    “What do you mean? Like more caringly or less aggression?” Roxas asked.
    Axel slapped him in the back of the head.
    “Oww, what was that for?” Roxas asked.
    “They’re the same thing!” Axel stated.
    “I don’t think you’ve gone soft, because you just slapped me,” Roxas said while walking away.
    The intercom came on.
    “All members report to the lounge immediately for a meeting,” Xemnas said.
    He walked into the lounge and sat beside Larxene.
    “Where’s Roxas?” Axel asked to Larxene.
    “I thought he was with you,” Larxene assumed.
    “No, he’s not,” Axel said.
    Xemnas approached in front of the members.
    “Roxas will not be with us for a while, so don’t worry about him,” Xemnas stated.
    “I need the following person to stand up, Larxene,” Xemnas said.
    “Everyone else can go back to your duties.”
    Larxene stood up while everyone walked out.

    “What do you want Xemnas?” Larxene asked.
    He stood silently at her for a few minutes.
    “I want… your freedom.” Xemnas stated.
    “What?” asked Larxene.
    “I want you to do some tasks for me. You’ve got the right qualities for them,” Xemnas said.
    “No Xemnas. I enjoy my freedom as I am intended to,” Larxene said.
    “It would be a shame if something was to happen to Roxas, now wouldn’t it?” asked Xemnas smirking.
    Larxene made a sad face.
    “Where is he?” she asked.
    “That’s not the question you should be asking. You should be asking how you can save him,” Xemnas said.
    “I have 5 tasks for you to do, before you can ever see him again. After you’ve done those 5 tasks, you’ll be given another task to do. After you finish those tasks, you have 5 more tasks to do to find the 5 key’s that unlock the door to where Roxas is,” he said while giving her a list.
    “Why are you doing this?” asked Larxene as she looked at the list.
    “You’ve gone soft, Larxene. I won’t lie to you. Now be off,” Xemnas said while pointing to the door.
    When she put her hand on the doorknob, Xemnas said one final thing.
    “Oh, and speak one word of this to anyone, you’ll pay the ultimate price.”
    She opened the door and ran out sobbing. Axel bumped into her at the corner of the hallway and accidentally knocked her down.
    “Larxene, what’s wrong?” Axel asked her.
    She just kept letting out cries and sobbed more. She ran past Axel, but Axel grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him.
    “Larxene, tell me what’s wrong!” he yelled. She was pushing him off her and she ran into her room.
    Axel ran into Xemnas’ office.
    “What did you do to her?” asked Axel.
    “I’ve simply gave her some chores to do,” Xemnas said.
    “That’s not all. She’s in her room crying her eyes out,” Axel stated.
    “She’s softer than a rose,” Xemnas said to him self.

    *Flashback*

    “You know we got to do something about that. They’ve gone soft. We got to toughen them up a bit,” Xemnas said.

    *End Flashback*

    “What did you do to her?!” yelled Axel. Xemnas stood up and got out one of his lasers.
    “I suggest you go now,” he said.
    Axel walked out of the room.
    He ran up to Larxene’s room.
    “Larxene open up! It’s me, Axel!” he said while pounding on the door.
    “Please, just go away!” Larxene said while she was laying on her bed.
    “Tell me what Xemnas did to you,” he demanded.
    She walked up to the door but didn’t let him in.
    “No! Okay? That’s the problem! I can’t tell anyone or he’ll hurt Roxas!” she yelled. She covered her mouth.
    “I...I... I didn’t mean to say that!” she said worried.
    Xemnas appeared out of no where.
    “No, I didn’t say I’d hurt Roxas, cause that won’t toughen you up,” Xemnas said. He grabbed her arm and dragged her out of the room.
    “Let go!” she yelled.
    Axel hit Xemnas with a fireball.
    “Let her go now!” he demanded.
    “Larxene, you choose. Either Roxas or you! Pick you choice!” Xemnas said. She knew one of them was going to be punished.
    She let out a big sigh and said, “Me.”
    “Axel, don’t try to save me. Even though you help me, I got to take care of this on my own,” she said.
    “Xemnas, can I talk to her for a minute before you do whatever you want to do to her.”
    “If I had a heart I wouldn’t, but I don’t have one. You got 5 minutes to report to the lounge,” Xemnas stated as he walked off.
    “You can’t go,” Axel stated.
    “Axel, I want to tell you the truth,” she said.
    “Tell me,” he said.
    “I… uh…I…love you, not Roxas,” she said.
    “Then why did you go out with him?” he asked.
    “I didn’t want to hurt his feelings. He’ too young for me, and he’s REALLY immature,” she said.
    “What does that have to do with now?” Axel asked.
    “It’s my fault he’s in trouble, but if I was dating you, you’d be the one in trouble,” she explained.
    “Do you know where he is?” Axel asked.
    “No, and I want you to promise me something,” she demanded.
    “Sure, anything,” Axel said.
    “Don’t’ save me,” she demanded again.
    “But…” Axel said before she was cut off.
    “If you really care about me, then don’t save me,” she said while walking down towards the lounge.
    Axel didn’t know what to do, but to follow her.

    --------------------Toughen it Up-----------------------------

    All members (except for Axel, Xemnas and Roxas) were sitting in the lounge waiting to see what was to happen.
    Larxene was standing in front of them all while Xemnas was dragging Roxas’ motionless body across the floor. Xemnas stood a few feet away from Larxene and slid Roxas’ body in between them both.
    “Larxene, if you truly love Roxas, take him,” Xemnas said.
    She just stood there very angrily.
    “You don’t love him do you?” Xemnas said.
    “No, I don’t.” she said while putting Roxas’ arm over her neck. She walked down and put him in a seat then walked back upstage.
    Axel entered the room.
    “Larxene, don’t do this!” yelled Axel.
    “If Xemnas wants me to toughen up, I will,” she said.
    She expected to get in a fight with Xemnas.
    “Don’t hold back,” Xemnas said.
    “Don’t worry, I’ll bring it!” she said while getting out her weapon.
    Xemnas took out his laser blades.
    “Axel, Roxas is over there,” she said while pointing to the seat. Axel ran over to check on him.
    “Roxas, Roxas!” Axel yelled while shaking him. He slowly opened his eyes.
    ”Hmm, wha-what?” he asked weakly.
    “You okay little man?” Axel asked.
    “Yeah, but, my head feels as if I had been hit by a rock,” he said while putting his hand behind his head.
    “Listen…uh…, you were uhh...kidnappedbyXemnas, Larxenetriedtosaveyoubynottellinganyone, butsheaccidentallytoldmeandXemnaspoppedoutofnowhereandtookherheretobepunished!” Axel said quickly.
    Roxas took a few seconds to understand what he was saying. His eye’s got wide and he jumped up to see Larxene studying Xemnas’ stance.
    “Are you going to make the first move or shall I?” Larxene asked?
    Xemnas just smirked at her. She started by running up and trying to slash him with her weapon, but Xemnas jumped up and counter attacked her.
    “Larxene!” Roxas yelled. He tried to run up, but Axle grabbed his hood.
    “She needs to do this on her own,” Axel stated. So all Roxas could do was watch.
    Larxene got up and tried it another time, but Xemnas counterattacked again, only, this time, Larxene dodged HIS counterattack and went for her own. She was successful.
    Xemnas got up and tried to hit her, but she was too quick. She ended up kicking the lasers out of his hand, and kicked him against the wall. She ran over, held him forcefully against the wall, and held he weapon against his neck.
    “This battle is OVER Xemnas” she yelled. She pushed him to the floor and stepped off the stage.
    Axel was very proud.
    “You did it!” Axel yelled.
    “Yeah, I did, didn’t I?” she asked. She looked at Roxas. She went from happy to sad.
    “Roxas,” she said while sighing, “I haven’t been honest with you. I…don’t…*sighs*… I don’t love you, the way you love me. I’m sorry, but I was in love with Axel here, ever since he saved me last time from Xemnas.”
    “I figured that out a long time ago. I was waiting for you to say how you truly felt,” Roxas said.
    “So, you’re not mad?” Larxene asked with a BIG grin across her face.
    “Naww,” he said. Larxene turned to Axel.
    “I think you deserve this,” Larxene said while leaning in for a kiss.
    “I think you do too,” Axel said while leaning in for the kiss also.
    Axel’s dark green eye’s met up with her beautiful Aqua eyes, and they kissed…

    Don’t you just love a happy ending… Wait a minute

    The end?? Aww man1 I love writing these stories!
     
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    Wow...THAT scene seems familiar, lol :)
     
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    nooooooo!!! it ended? but.....but it was such a good story and i thought it was zexion deeds next that was so cute in the end roxXlarx is just wrong kinda weird too O.o fantastic story!!! =D i love it gee i keep readin to many fanfic and i feel like making one too
     
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    please dont stop they are really good
     
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    This story ROCKS!! Sorry that I only JUST read this chapter...