Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 21

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  1. Sce13 Banned

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    Chapter 21…

    Axel stood over Xigbar who was on the floor…
    Xigbar made a you’re-so-gonna-regret-this-one-day face. Xigbar stood up and put his guns away.
    Larxene walked over as Axel put away his disks. She put one hand on his shoulder while she stood behind him…
    “Xigbar will not accept defeat,†Larxene whispered in his ear. Axel looked down, closed his eyes and nodded.
    “I have to face my father…I want you and Alexis to come along…so I can prove that my life was not a waste of their time…†Axel said whispering. Axel walked away, leaving Xigbar.

    Later that evening in Axel’s bedroom…

    “Do you even know where your parents live?†Larxene asked.
    Axel nodded while closing his eyes.
    “I went to the hospital top visit Lexy a few hours ago…She told me where they live…†Axel stated.
    Larxene picked up Alexis who was in the crib…
    “You ready to face your father Axel?†Larxene asked.
    Axel opened his eyes and looked at Larxene.
    “I’m ready,†Axel said… He opened up a corridor of darkness, and the three were on their way.


    Location: The Eternal Nightfall

    Axel, Larxene, and Alexis came through the Corridor. They approached a mansion, which supposedly belonged to his parents.
    “You think you can do it?†Larxene asked.
    Axel turned around and nodded. They walked up the path that led to the door of the house. He opened it up and saw a large hallway. Larxene and Alexis followed. They walked for a few minutes till Axel saw both parents sitting in the den.
    Axel banged on the wall. His mother looked up with a fright while his father turned around in his seat.
    “I should’ve known that you weren’t dead,†his father said.
    “I’m not dead…and I have no heart…†Axel stated.
    “I knew that you would end up like a nobody…You’re just a waste of god-given talent…†his father said while getting up out of his chair. His mother saw Larxene standing behind him…
    “Who’s the witch?†she asked. Larxene made a face at her.
    “This is my fiancé, Larxene…†he said.
    “Oh…you think just because you have a fiancé, means that you think we will welcome you back into our lives?†his father asked.
    “You never gave a damn about me father…†Axel said.
    His father looked at Alexis…
    “Is that your nobody child?†he asked. Axel shook his head no...
    “That’s my somebody daughter…†Axel stated.
    “Axel…we never loved you…just go home and kill yourself…save me the trouble…†his father said.
    Larxene stepped in front of Axel.
    “Do you fear death?†she asked as she got her weapon out.
    “Listen here missy… I’ve come close to dying many times…you think I’m gonna be scared of you?†he asked.
    She gave the maddest face at him…
    “I don’t think…†she said giving a smile on her face. Axel recognized the smile. She took her weapon and tried to strike him.
    “LARXENE NO!†Axel yelled as he grabbed her fist.
    Larxene looked at him giving a clueless face.
    “I’ll do it,†he whispered. Larxene nodded and stepped back.
    “Where is Lexy?†Axel asked his father…
    “How the hell should I know? I’ve not paid attention to her for years…†he answered.
    “I’ll tell you…you gave her a damned life…You caused her to loose her heart…She thought you cared about her…You’re gonna kill every child you have!†Axel yelled. Axel’s father pushed him down, and stepped on his chest.
    “I’ll kill all of them till I have the perfect child,†he stated.
    Larxene pushed Axel’s father off of him. She then helped him up using her free hand…
    “Close your eyes Larxene,†Axel said. She covered Alexis’s eyes with her hand and then closed her eyes. She heard a scream, then a thump…Once she opened them, she saw Axel’s father lying on the ground, with Axel overtop of him…His mother was on the ground sobbing…
    “I’ll never regret, the day I killed you,†Axel stated. H turned around and walked towards Larxene…
    “Let’s go,†he said… Larxene nodded. Axel opened up a corridor of Darkness and let them all walk through…


    Okay, so I’m not allowed to make any more polls in the creativity corner…It’s against the rules.

    So I’ll do this! Reply with your answer so I can know what to do!



    Should Axel go back and kill his mother too?

    Yes?
    No?
     
  2. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    well i suppose you could, they were nasty parents who were prepared to kill him in a fire

    another great chapter i really loved it

    why are you not allowed to post any more poles?
     
  3. Sce13 Banned

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    idk..this guy said to stop making ******ed polls...and that it was against the rules to make polls in the creativity cornor
     
  4. sT3pH!e313 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I don't think Axel should kill his mother because it would lower him to his parents level of ruthlessness. So short answer ...... No.
     
  5. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    Yeah, what the heck, Axel should kill his mom. After all, an eye-for-an-eye, right???

    I love your stories, but I did notice, you seem to make Axel cry alot. I don't know if that's just me, but I wouldn't think of him as the crying at the drop of a hat kind of guy. Anyway, forget what I think, I love your stories!!! :D :D :D
     
  6. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I love it! Axel should kill his mom. Then his full transformation to the dark side will be complete.
     
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    uh...Axel doesn't really cry alot...LArxene does... haha! But I think I'm making them seem like whimps or something...*gasps*

    uh-oh...lol