Axel's good Deed's Chapter 13

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Should Axelpropose to Larxene in Axel's Good Deeds Chapter 14?

  1. OF COURSE!!!

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  2. duh :) They are the perfect couple

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  3. NO! YOU MADE ME MAD THE SECOND THEY STARTED DATING!

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  4. No, Axel shouldn't! Because hes gonna propose to ME!

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    Chapter 13:

    Axel woke up in the infirmary with a fright. He had a sharp pain in his back and his chest.
    “LEXY!” he yelled.
    Vexen got up from his seat on the other side of the room.
    “You’ve finally woke up,” he said.
    Axel put his hand on his face.
    “How long was I out man?” he asked.
    “You want the truth?” he asked.
    “Give it to me,” he said.
    “Are you sure?” he asked.
    “YES!” he yelled.
    “Two weeks,” he said.
    “TWO WEEKS?” he yelled.
    “We thought you would never wake up,” he said.
    “What in the world happened to me?” he asked.
    “Zexion used Live Saver on you. It kept you alive, but drained all your energy,” Vexen said.
    “What have I missed?” Axel said.
    “The only important thing you missed was the new recruit,” Vexen said.
    “Who is he?” Axel asked.
    “Not a he. The new recruit is a girl,” Vexen said.
    “What’s her name?” Axel asked.
    “Her name is Lexy. She’s 15,” Vexen said.
    “LEXY IS HERE?” Axel yelled sitting up. But a large pain came in his back.
    “AHH!” he yelled.
    “Take it easy!” Vexen yelled, “You’ve got stitches in your back,” he said.
    Axel lied back down.
    “Lexy is here?” he said crying.
    “She knows you somehow. She’s visited you everyday since she’s been here,” Vexen asked.
    “Lexy is my little sister!” he said.
    Vexen helped Axel out of his bed so he wouldn’t have to bend over.
    “I’m not any doctor, but you need to take it easy. Don’t do anything to cause any bending to the back,” Vexen said.
    Axel nodded and walked out of the room limping. The first person he saw was Larxene and Alexis.
    “Axel!” she yelled smiling.
    “Hey Larxene,” he said.
    “Did you hear about Lexy?” she asked.
    “Yeah, Vexen told me,” he said.
    “You need to meet her. She’s made friends with everyone!” Larxene said.
    “Alrighty, let me hold Alexis,” he said.
    Larxene reached Axel their daughter.
    “Hey sweetie,” he said playing with her.
    They started walking down to the living room where Lexy was sitting. Axel gave Alexis to Larxene as they walked up behind her seat.
    “Lexy, this is Axel,” Larxene introduced.
    Lexy stood up, turned around and saw her brother.
    “Lexy?” Axel asked. Lexy had long full head of blonde
    hair. She had green eye’s, similar the Axel’s.
    “Axel? Is it you brother?” she asked.
    “It’s me Lexy!” he yelled crying.
    “AXEL!” she yelled hugging him.
    “Lexy!” he yelled crying.
    Larxene stood there in shock. They stopped hugging.
    “Uh…Lexy, I haven’t seen you since you were 3 years old,” Axel said.
    “Mom and Dad couldn’t keep me away,” she said pulling her hair behind her ear.
    Axel looked at Larxene who’s jaw was dropped.
    “She’s your sister?” asked Larxene.
    “Yes, my parent’s would never let me see her when I was a nobody. They thought I had a disease, so I came here. Now I’m reunited with my sister.” He said.
    “Did you get my messages?” she asked.
    “What messages?” Axel asked.
    “These messages.” Axel heard a voice in his head that sounded like Lexy, but her mouth didn’t move.
    “You can talk to people in their thoughts?” Axel asked.
    She nodded and smiled. She looked at Alexis and saw her being so cute…
    “Can I hold Alexis Larxene?” Lexy asked.
    “Sure, do you know how to support her?” she asked.’
    “Yeah, after Axel left, mom and dad had 3 more kids, and they referred to me as the oldest, but I disagreed with them. Every time I said your name, well…” she said while raising her sleeve up. There were many scars, bruises and scabs.
    “Mom and Dad did that to you?” he asked.
    ”Yes,” she said while holding the baby.
    “She looks like you two a lot,” she said.
    “She’s got my looks!” Axel blurted out smiling.
    Larxene slapped him in the back of the head.
    “Oww,” he said.
    “She has both out looks. She’s got my Aqua eyes and Axel’s spiky red hair,” Larxene said.
    “Her hair is growing fast,” Axel said.
    Axel saw a baby toy in the floor and bent down to pick it up so he could give it to Lexy, but he’d forgotten he had stitches in his back. The sharp pain came back to his back.
    “Ahh!” he groaned.
    “Axel? Are you okay?” Larxene asked. She saw blood seeping through his hood; Axel fell to the floor semi-unconscious.
    “VEXEN!” Larxene yelled.
    A few moments later, Vexen came running down the stairs.
    “Lexy take Alexis with you up to my room, now!” Larxene yelled. She nodded and ran up the stairs.
    “What happened?” he asked. He saw blood seeping on the floor.
    “He’s ripped his stitches. DAMNIT AXEL I TOLD YOU!!!!” Vexen yelled.
    “Let’s just help him,” Larxene said.
    Axel could still barley see, he saw 3 people trying to help him. He knew that two of them were Larxene and Vexen, but who was the third person? He thought.



    “Axel?” Lexy asked.

    “Lexy, where am I”

    “You’re asleep. You’ve been asleep for a while. Now is the time to wake up.”

    “I can’t. I don’t know how to.”

    “Just open your eyes.”

    “I can’t Lexy.”

    “Just hang on to my voice…my voice…my voice…”

    “Lexy, are you there? LEXY!!??!!” Axel yelled.

    No response.
     
  2. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    idiot Axel! VEXEN TOLD YOU YOU HAD STICHES!!!! :mad: *kicks Axel in the shin*

    Oh well, I still love you!!! :D
     
  3. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    This is awsome...........Axel and Larxene forever!!! :D :D
     
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    thanks
    I'm posting the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow!:D
     
  5. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Plz today, can Axel propose to Larxene? They make a great couple. :D
     
  6. Roxas- PARTYMAN MORE LIKE HOMOVAN 73M SUCK MY B****!

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    Sce13, you just make the chapters better and better.
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

    *cries hysterically*

    AXEL!!!!!

    *cries more*

    Great chapter, btw :)
     
  8. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Let me guess you don't like Larxene and Axel togather, it's better then him and Roxas, that would make him a pedafile.
     
  9. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    I know!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Rosey Chaser

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    YAY i love reading this. ITS AWSOME!:) :) :) :) :) :) :)
     
  11. Reoy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    lexy cool i cant believe he pass out for 2 weeks!!!