Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 11

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Xemnas kidnapped Alexis. WHo finds out? *Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 11*

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  1. Sce13 Banned

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    Chapter 11:

    After Larxene gave birth, the nurse asked for the name.
    “Her name is Alexis,” Larxene said. A female nurse handed Alexis to Larxene.
    “Look at her Axel. She’s got your spiky hair,” she said softly chuckling.
    “She has your eyes,” Axel said smiling.
    Larxene put her hand under the baby’s chin and the baby grabbed her index finger.
    “Look,” Larxene said.
    “She’s perfect,” Axel said.
    “You want to hold her?”
    Axel nodded. Larxene reached their beautiful daughter to him.
    “Alexis, I love you” Axel said. He put his index finger at her small hand. She grabbed it and started cooing.
    “Axel, we have a child!” Larxene said with a big smile.
    “She’s going to be a big responsibility you know,” Axel said.
    “Yeah, but we said we will love her, heart or not,” Larxene said.

    Axel asked one of the nurses a favor.
    “Can you check and see if this baby has a heart?” asked Axel.
    The nurse looked at him strangely.
    “Sir, every living creature has a heart,” she explained.
    “We don’t,” he said.
    “Then that means you’re…” she stated. She gave a worried look. She got out her stethoscope and checked the baby. She gave a big smile.
    “Listen,” she said handing him the tool.
    Axel listened to the heartbeats. The nurse then let Larxene listen. Once Larxene heard them she broke out in tears.
    “She has a heart!” she said sobbing. Axel broke out in tears also.
    “Our baby girl has a heart,” Axel said. He hugged Larxene who let out cries.
    “Maim?” asked Axel, “Will you keep it a secret about us being nobodies?” Axel whispered.
    She nodded. Axel smiled and mouthed the words “thank you” She then took a picture of the baby and the parents for Larxene and Axel.

    Axel walked into the other room, got Zexion, and Roxas, and returned back to the castle but Larxene and the baby had to stay at the hospital.
    “Zexion’s back!” Demyx said.
    Marluxia smiled.
    “What does she look like?” he asked. Axel took the picture out.
    “She has your hair,” Marluxia said.
    “She’s got Larxene’s eyes,” Demyx said.
    Xigbar came down the stairs.
    “Axel!” he said smiling.
    “Want to see the baby?” he asked.
    “Sure!” he said. Axel showed him the picture.
    “Awww…she’s got your-“
    “Not another word!” Axel yelled.
    Demyx snickered quietly. Axel turned around and gave a mean look, then ran behind Marluxia.
    “I know she has my hair and Larxene’s blue eyes, but she has something else,” Axel said.
    “Does she have foot fungus?” Demyx asked nervously coming out from behind Marluxia. Axel turned around and slapped him in the back of the head.
    “Owww!” he yelled.
    “No, she has…a heart,” Axel said.
    Everyone stood in silence.
    “I didn’t think it was possible for a couple of nobodies to have child with a heart,” Xemnas said coming through from the door to the lounge.
    “It’s true!” Axel said.
    “Bring the child to me,” he said.
    “I can’t, she’s under observation.” Xemnas growled.
    “Bring it to me the first chance you get,” he said.
    “Alexis is not an “it” Xemnas. She is a somebody, and we are her nobody parent’s. She deserves better than what she’s to live by,” Axel said.
    “Then get rid of the child. We need no child,” Xemnas said trying to convince him to give her up.
    “No, cause me and Larxene is all she needs,” Axel said.
    Xemnas growled and walked up to Axel, for he knew he was going to be hit.
    “You DARE to disobey and order?” he whispered.
    “Bring it on,” Axel said.
    Xemnas punched him in his stomach, knocking him to his knees. Xemnas grabbed his spiky red hair and pulled his ear up to his mouth.
    “That child better be gone, or I’ll kill it myself,” Xemnas said pushing him down on the floor and he started walking away.
    “You have no authority!” Axel yelled trying to get up. Xemnas stopped walking and turned around.
    “I HAVE the authority, because I am the leader of this organization. You defy me, you’ll pay the ultimate price,” Xemnas said while walking up the stairs.
    “What did he say when he yanked your hair?” Xigbar asked.
    “He said for me to get rid of my child, or he’ll kill her himself.”
    “He ain’t going to even LOOK at your child without someone watching her,” Zexion said.
    Xigbar helped Axel up.
    “We have to protect her,” Roxas said…

    2 day’s later.

    A corridor of darkness appeared in the living room. It was Larxene and Alexis.
    “Hey everyone!” she said. She returned with her regular figure and was in better moods.
    Luxord walked over to hug Larxene and take a good look at the baby.
    “She’s adorable,” he said.
    “Yeah, she has her father’s hair,” she said.
    “and she also has your aqua blue eyes,” he said again.
    Xemnas and Xaldin entered the room.
    “So, there is the little nobodies child,” Xemnas said.
    “Yes, and you are to never touch her Xemnas. I’ve the way you treat the organization, and if you even as so TOUCH her, I’ll kill you,” Larxene said grabbing her bag and walking up the stairs. Everyone she saw on the way stopped her to look at the baby.
    She reached her room, where a crib bed was set up, a station and a playpen.
    She sat down in her chair and sang a lullaby.
    The baby soon fell asleep, and it was 10:00pm. She set the baby in the crib and she went to sleep.

    A few hours she woke up to the baby crying. She didn’t care that it bothered her. She would just feed her, burp her, and then put her to sleep.

    But when Larxene woke up in the morning, Alexis was gone. She woke up with a fright.
    “AXEL!” she yelled. She was scared to death.
    “AXEL! She yelled again.
     
  2. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    :D i picked roxas cuz every time i pick him something bad but funny happens to him, im so mean *evil grin*

    anyway i like the story so far
     
  3. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    omg loved it loved it, this is so good, i get so into it, i ignore what my families saying around me lol

    :D :D :D *waits for next chapter*:D :D :D
     
  4. Roxas- PARTYMAN MORE LIKE HOMOVAN 73M SUCK MY B****!

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    So did I, I chose Roxas. But, such a good story, It's brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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  6. Feraxys Merlin's Housekeeper

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    great story!!!!! really awesome. Keep on writing!:D :D :D

    I voted Zexion (let him do at least 1 good thing in his life:D )
     
  7. Roxy~Roosje Destiny Islands Resident

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    Larxene .. don't know why someting is telling me larxene :P ...
     
  8. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    I love this story :D :D :D

    good job!!!!!! :)
     
  9. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Same thing here! :)

    This is seriously turning into like a soap opera! its really good!!!
     
  10. Marluxia-rox Merlin's Housekeeper

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    neeeeeed moooooooorrrreee

    i neeeeeed mooooorrrrreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Are u making another 1???
    i neeeeeed mooooorrrrreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    i cant wait 4 number 12!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
     
  11. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    I am liking this !!!!:D :D :D :D :D
     
  12. Reoy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    oo interesting i choose roxas cause maybe something happen and he saw i was ike wtf when luxord hugged larxene O.o