Axel's Good Deed Chapter 5

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how should Axel help Luxord?

  1. Helping him with his gambling problem

    11 vote(s)
    55.0%
  2. help ask xigbar to marry him

    5 vote(s)
    25.0%
  3. Save him from certain death

    3 vote(s)
    15.0%
  4. help with his obbsession over poker

    1 vote(s)
    5.0%
  1. Sce13 Banned

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    Chapter 5

    Axel woke up from another loud crash in the middle of the night, but this time, it came from the hallway.
    “Can’t I ever get some sleep? He said getting out of bed.
    He saw Marluxia sneaking into Vexen’s room and coming back out.
    “Marly! What are you doing?†Axel screamed while whispering.
    Marluxia jumped scared to death.
    “Nothing important, just go back to bed,†Marluxia suggested.
    “I can’t with you making all that noise,†Axel said while shutting the door.

    ---------------------The next Morning-----------------------

    Axel woke up, got dressed, and combed his hair.
    He walked down the stairway and into the kitchen. Marluxia was there.
    “What was that all about last night?†he asked Marluxia.
    “Oh… um…Axel, can I trust you?†Marluxia asked.
    “Sure, what is it?†asked Axel.
    “I am kind of in love with Vexen,†he said.
    Axel said, “Okay.†He got up from his seat.
    “I am going to walk away, and we will never speak of this again,†Axel said.
    “Please help me! You helped Roxas and Larxene!†Marluxia said.
    “Yeah, but they are the opposite sex though!†Axel said.
    “Please,†Marluxia said.
    “Alright, I’ll go talk to him,†Axel said.
    “Thanks,†Marluxia said.

    Axel walked up to Vexen’s room.
    “Hey Vexen, you’ve got a secret admirer,†Axel said.
    “Who?†asked Vexen.
    “Marluxia,†answered Vexen. Vexen started to smile.
    “Will you ask him to come up here, I got a surprise for him†asked Vexen.
    “Sure, but did you know it was him?†asked Axel.
    “No, but someone left me a note on my table wanting to meet me in here,†Vexen explained.
    “Okay,†Axel said while running down the stairs into the kitchen.
    Hey Marluxia, Vexen wants to meet you in his room,†Axel said.
    “Thanks a bunch!†yelled Marluxia as he ran up the stairs.
    Axel smiled.

    A few hours later he walked up the stairs, but he heard some noises coming from Vexen’s room. He stood next to the closed door to hear what is going on.
    "Mmm that’s so good," Vexen said.
    "Feels good too" he said again
    "Especially right there!" he yelled
    "What? Really? Let me try!"
    "Ya! Right there!" Vexen said again
    "Oww. stop yanking! It's not like it's all gone" Marly said
    "Ha-ha. Sorry. Mmm that's really good," Vexen said
    "GAH! Aww crap, it's dripping!" Marly said
    "Man sorry about that. You can't control it," Vexen said
    "It's okay, we can lick it up," Marly said
    "Oh good idea," Vexen said.
    "But not there! That tickles!" Marly said
    "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE?" Axel yelled
    He saw Vexen and Marly eating a salty sweet ice cream.
    "Uhh, you want one?" asked Vexen
    "Why the hell did I just think that?" Axel asked himself.






    I got the ending from here:
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  2. Reoy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    lol xD i saw that comic before omg XDD thats so hilarious lol i cant believe marly would like a old dude good story! x3

    u know this is my first time reading your chap and it already sounds good gonna start from chap 1 to 4
     
  3. Sce13 Banned

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    thanks. I was just looking around photobucket and saw it..
    THe perfect story! lol
     
  4. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    *laughs until i die*

    THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!
     
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    lol!!! I liked that one!! It was amusing!!
     
  6. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    *ROFLs at the ending* XDDDDDD

    “Marluxia,†answered Vexen. Vexen started to smile.

    That's basically the only problem I saw. =3

    Very good! ^-^

    ............

    What? No one's gonna help out Luxord with his love life? XDDDDD

    *mercilessly pwnt by Luxord and Xigbar*

    I surendeeeeeer! DX