I'm that ninja c: Well, hello hello~ I've returned to KHV this year. I keep disappearing & I know it's absolutely horrible. So to my comeback, I've decided to share my artworks - a thing I've always done a lot on this site aside from RPing~ haha. So here are some of my latest works just for you guys! Hidden in spoilers because I'm a ninja n__n (ohyeah, arranged from oldest - newest works) ----------- A couple of OCs of mine. Only one of them actually made it out alive and into a very-slowly-progressing webcomic with me and my friends. Spoiler http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/133/b/6/I_Love_You_5_by_xAtDeath_s_Gate.jpg Halloween 2010 art! Nightmare Before Christmas inspired, of course c: Spoiler http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE..._2010_line_art_by_xatdeath_s_gate-d324ye7.jpg This was made for my friend Shayne. He's an amazing singer & he loves Eevees. i used kiddie markers. lol. Spoiler http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/342/9/6/shayne_orok_eevee_by_xatdeath_s_gate-d34god4.jpg Well, this was traditionally drawn, but I tried photoshop! I didn't have a tablet though, or a clue of what I was really doing... I'm going to take classes this summer though c: This is my character Gerard for my webcomic which is not out at all 8D Spoiler http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/036/7/5/gerard_skye_linne_by_xatdeath_s_gate-d38u0cu.jpg This was drawn for Christofer Drew (<3) I love him okay? & I was supposed to give it during his concert but i didn't get to ; n ; Oh, but he smiled at me. heehee. :'3 But hence, the crap paper after the concert .__. Spoiler http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE...fer_drew_ingle_by_xatdeath_s_gate-d39xu8q.jpg My latest drawing, of my other character for my comic Marshe. I used my Letraset Tria & Pro markers, I wish I had copic markers but no... :c Spoiler http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE...karalius_tomic_by_xatdeath_s_gate-d3c96fo.jpg ---------- ...so yeah. Hey guys! I'd love some critique~ 'Cause I learned most from them back then when I got them years ago here on this site. ~Ninja poof c:~
Comments from the top. Very little actual critique. You probably know a lot more about art than I do. Though I feel the overall composition and quality is very good and stylistically consistent I'll nitpick and say that there are a few things that I feel lack the depth like the skateboard. I'm also not sure I like the way the background goes black at the bottom, it's not bad but I feel like it might look odd. I can't really make up my mind on it though. Again, mostly good. Stylistically consistent, aesthetically pleasing, blah blah blah. I still feel like the jack-o-lantern should be more detailed, just 'cause. It looks nice and looks correct for the most part. I feel like the guy's stripes could do with a little bending to show some third dimension but that might just end up making it look horrible. I dunno, I feel like even in simple or stylized drawings I should be able to feel like the character is three dimensional. Very good. No complaints. It looks nice but his arms are different lengths. That kind of thing just bugs me. Definitely my favorite in both design and execution of all thus far. No complaints.
Oh wow, thank you so much! n__n I'm learning to take time on my drawings now instead of rushing them and stuff. I'll definitely watch my lines more and be more detailed. Thank you also for realizing that arm thing. It bugs me too! But sometimes I miss it out. I'll be paying attention to proportions a lot. I'll also do lots of experiments with the things you've suggested like the blending and the three dimensional stuff. Again, thank you so much! This really helped c:
