Traditional Art Aqua-BIRTH BY SLEEP

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by AROS~91, Jan 10, 2008.

  1. AROS~91 Merlin's Housekeeper

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  2. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Congratulations, this it the first Aqua fanart I've ever seen! *on KHV at least* Looks very lovely too, has this Snow White thing going on with the dress.

    What I suggest you do when colouring is to use the eraser on a very soft opacity, that way you can soften the edges of your airbrush strokes, it'll blend more in with the colours. But if you only use one layer you'll have to change the opacity ans size of the airbrush extremly often to get the same result.

    Nice lineart as well, nice and smooth. :3 Only thing I'd want to change with Aqua would be the neck, right not it's too tall and thick comparing to the head and body.
     
  3. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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  4. AROS~91 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    (Yay ^^ replies ^^)

    Im really glad you guys like it- even more happier that you gave me a 8/10(thanks, Soild Snake!!)

    and....about the dress-considering there is ABSOLUTELY no artwork (or scenes) on her, i have little to no ref for her--so she'll just have to suffer with the werid looking, snow white-like dress ^^


    again, thanks for the comments! virtual cookies for everyone ^^
     
  5. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    It is indeed a very fine piece of work. Though I'd make some airbrushing on her dress a little more smoother cuz some stands out as out-of-placed lines whereas shading would be more clustered. Also, try to fix the right shoulder guard, it seems a little bit TOO far off and a bit too big. Otherwise, it's really neat. 9.5/10, fix the shadings and u get full score.

    Left a comment too...
     
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    It looks good, her neck could be shorter, and perhaps move the black outlines of her eye on the right under her hair as well. The airbrushing on her chest could be blended in more as well.
     
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    I like it, but try to keep the hair out of her eyes, you can't really see them that well, and plus, she dosn't really wear that kind of stuff, so you might not be able to tell that thats her.