Do I know who I am? Do you know who you are? Questions we ask everyday Answers that are never complete Who knows the answer? Is it you? Is it me? Only time will tell until we find our answer A pathway to seek the answers we want a long journey ahead Join me will you? -------------------------------- Hmm I think this poem is okay. not really my best
hehe. i'm glad you are writing poems :] that is awesome. trust me, its amazing work. maybe longer, its beautiful, make it longer xD but then again, short poems are good as well. all the critique i have xD. oh and put a comma between me and will, last line. ^^