Another little poem

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  1. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Yep another short poem :D

    What Do You Do?

    What to do when the clock strikes one
    And nothing needs to be done?

    Do you take some paint
    And paint a painting?

    Do you take a pencil and draw
    Till there is nothing left to draw?

    What to do when the clock strikes two
    And everyone’s asleep but you?

    Do you think of someone close to you
    And wonder if they think of you?

    Do you lie awake listening
    To the tick tock of the clock?

    What do you do when the clock strikes three
    And you want some tea?

    You get some of course and drift off to bed

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    well that was random.... :D
    i know the first bit doesn't really rhyme much...
     
  2. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    ah well, its actually still pretty good.
     
  3. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    thanks... i don't really rhyme well... never really got good at it
     
  4. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Another quick one, but still great. My favorite part was

    "What to do when the clock strikes two
    And everyone’s asleep but you?

    Do you think of someone close to you
    And wonder if they think of you?"

    great job again.
     
  5. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    i give credit to kevz for that really i just changed what he said a bit
     
  6. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    yea, so im gonna SUE you! lolz jk:D
     
  7. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    you wouldn't do that to little ol' me now would you? *bats eyelashes*
    lol
     
  8. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    depends, how much you got?
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    It was good. I agree with Kiryu, that was my fav part too.

    But ya know I'm all for that mush stuff. ~_~