Traditional Art Another KH drawing I did

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by CloakedThunder, Jul 5, 2015.

  1. CloakedThunder Destiny Islands Resident

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    My attempt at drawing cartoon realism. Any advice on how to improve would be appreciated.

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    CloakedThunder, Jul 5, 2015
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  2. nickoboyzx Gummi Ship Junkie

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    the upper lips need to get a little bit smaller though
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    nickoboyzx, Jul 18, 2015
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    If you're interested in emulating the KH style, the eyes are twice the size that they should be. Same goes for the lips. And his right eye seems to be bulging out (looking at the silhouette of his face). If anything, it should curve in slightly.

    It's hard to tell, but it looks like it might be a small drawing. Don't be afraid to go bigger. It can feel overwhelming at first, but if you loosen up your hand and make lighter lines, it gives you much more freedom. When you draw small, every move your hand makes counts for a lot. Making little mistakes are less of a big deal on a larger drawing.
     
    Explode, Jul 23, 2015
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