Traditional Art Another Christmas Picture (unfinished)

Title says...It is far from being finished, but this is wat I have so far.

 

There's something very cute about your expressions.. I really love Roxas' look tilting carefully up. (You forgot the shuriken star thing?!) The hair looks great man, I always have such trouble with it!

Crit:

Namine's legs are like they're supporting against the sharp edge of whatever she's sitting on - you should study legs on a person who is sitting, ask someone in your family or friends to pose for you (best solution) or use a photo reference. This was the main "problem" of the drawing really. The arm length seemed too short to me. :x

If you want Roxas to fade away, I recommend that you shade on the rest of him too, to avoid this "frame" effect going on. Shade LIGHTLY.

Helpful? ^^;

 

I have a small question about the lighting in this pic. I'm not entirely sure where it's coming from after examining the tree branch in the corner.

 

lawl, u'll figure things out once I finish this...Trust me, it is FAR from being done...-_-

 

Kay. Aside from that, it looks like you're off to a good start.