Digital Art And with my one last gasping breath I'd apologize for bleeding on your shirt

This is a huge thing for me, because this is one of the first sigs I've made that I actually like. I very loosely followed a tutorial with this, going off on my own around the middle of it. xD

But here it is:



Cnc plzkthnx.

 

I don´t see the text very well, I can only read the lines "This" "Is" and "Heart", nothing more to say.

 

It's supposed to be like that. Why does everyone never understand my text? ;~;

 

Try making the text more noticeable. The form you make it confuses me lawl.

This tag has to get off your slump if you were in one. Looks great. The pentool is a great addition as well. The smudging below the text can be a bit lowered on opacity. Try adding different style on the smudge. They all look the same settings. Otherwise, damn. Nice tag, KIU.

 

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You stole my text style :(. XD
Try and get rid of that fog to the right.
It doesn't look to good all "neh" like that. I mean, a little would be good, but it's like BLAMMMMM N***A.
Also, add summore depth I guess?
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