Traditional Art And on that day, it rained ....

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Wow girl, you really spring these out fast xD I swear you post something new everyday.

It's beautiful, as usual, although I have an issue with the clouds. They look unneat and scruffy to me D: I know they're meant to be heavy, dark clouds, but compared to the precision that you drew the girl and the patterns they look messy.

Good though, of course.

 

This is actually very good.
I like the way the designs are, and the body is in excellent proportions.
The only glitches I can find - and this is through looking in immense detail at the picture - is that the hand seems to be twisted at a rather awkward position when reaching upwards.
The second, and last, of them is the sky. What drawing utensil did you use? Perhaps you could blend it in a bit better, or that might just be the intended effect.

Overall, very good.

 

I love the outfit you drew for the girl, the lunchbox it cute. Plus you even detailed the lunchbox with little patterns/designs too. The use of the twirling designs instead of actual rain are lovely. The brownish color you used to draw this picture with is pretty as well. I actually like the thick clouds because then it draws attention to the sky which in turn draws attention to the designs. I love it. :3

 

Beautiful. I loved the darkness on the clouds and the moon you put in there. Loved the shading effect. But what I loved the most is those designs coming out of the clouds. You make this picture look alive. Great job.

 

Awwww, Thank you.
Glad you like it.
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I love you kites :=D:
Thank you for those lovely words.
Glad that you like this.
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Hmmm, you may be right about the hand dear.
I'll fix that.

I just used a HB and 2HB pencil.
Drawn on normal white paper.

Thank you for the Advice.
I well see what I can do to fix it.

Thanks again :lolface:

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Don't worry I'll darken the clouds up a bit.
To hide the scruffiness.
Also I'll sharpen the patterns.
Thank you.
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Use like, a tissue if you're using a soft pencil.
If you want to belnd good, use a 4-5B pencil and blend it with a tissue by rubbing in small circles.

Just an additional bit of advice I forgot to add on <3