Digital Art And another one!

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Chad Thundercucc, Sep 20, 2007.

  1. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Heh, I'm going crazy with the sig making. Good thing I'm getting good practice, though. Not sure if I'm getting better, or getting worse. D:

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    CnC would be helpful. D:
     
  2. darkslayer Twilight Town Denizen

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    I dont really like this one. The BG could be alot better
     
  3. Ultima-Sora Kingdom Keeper

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    WAY too much red!!!!
     
  4. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Well, too repetitive background and bad looking too, I don´t like it, so FOLLOW TUTORIALS!
     
  5. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Thanks for the honest opinions. =D I need comments like that to help me get better and stuff. So, yeah, keep 'em coming.
     
  6. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Oh, and another thing, GET MORE BRUSHES, and the layers windows is one of the most important tools if is wisely used.
     
  7. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    All the brushes I have suck. D:
     
  8. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Well, if you want some nice tutorials just pm me, okay?
     
  9. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Alright. I will.
     
  10. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    Ohhh, VGN~

    Good for a first-ish try.

    Alright, sticking a backgrounds, a pretty stock and a crappy star thinger for a light source won't get you anywhere. I suggest for your next one, use a tutorial that suits your level of graphic designing. I would link to one, but it might be advertising, so that's not a good idea.

    Onto the Cnc, you really didn't make anything special to it. There's just... a black vertical line. What's with that? OKay, using brushes you download from DeviantArt to blend in the stock with proper use will make it look great.

    DO something with your stock. It's just sitting there center stage and nothing special shining on it. Smudge it, or do something were it looks good.

    For a start, I give it a 5 of 10. For a REAL sig, I give it a 2.
    KEEP TRYING!
     
  11. DarknessKingdom The Kingpin of the TV

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    Well, firstly, you use way, way, way too much red. I mean, don't get me wrong. I like the colour 'red' but that was just too much for my taste. The lens flare also seemed pretty random and was added in for no reason.

    As Hissora, please DO SOMETHING WITH YOUR STOCK.

    1.5/5.
     
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    To start off, the background is very violent. Not literally of course but there is alot of very bright red with a non-attractive pattern. You should use smoother, more flowing backgrounds. Next is the render. I dont know what happened there but most of the time you shouldnt forcefully color your renders such solid colors. If you wanna color your render, it's best to use the color replacement tool ser on hue. Im not sure what that flare in each picture is for, but im guessing you tried to make a light source. It was a good try but light sources are more of a subtle thing that should seem natural. And like hissy, im also wondering what that black line is lol.

    Overall I say 3/10. Crono has spoken ( ´_ゝ`)
     
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    Your backgrounds are just, UGH. Just listen to me and look up some tutorials. This need way to much work for me to even make a helpful comment.
     
  14. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    Thanks for the comments guys. I'll try to improve. D:
     
  15. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    To much red, its a bit distracting.
     
  16. Roxas is Hot I'd lick his Sea Salt stick anytime. ♥

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    Tutorials are your friend! =D Here's a link Xigbar gave me not too long ago. Maybe it'll come in handy?

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  17. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Well, like some people mentioned - the background pattern is pretty much too repeative. If anything, making it fade away in a gradient way could be a solution. So that it would follow the light that you have added. If you add highlights on the character (Sasuke, I believe?) caused by said light it would blend more into a harmonic image.

    We learn from mistakes, so keep experimenting with the possibillities people suggest to you, the more different advice/tutorials you come over the more interesting result your future work may become.
     
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    Dont be so Negative dude! Just because your better, doesnt mean you can be all pushy about it.


    Heres a link for heaps mad brushes=]