Im pretty new to this place, so i don't know if i'm even posting in the right place, but it looks like it. Anyway, so I've had this idea in my head ever since i finished KHII. It's based loosely on KHII, as well as what I thought the Secret ending was to do with. Over time, The plotline has become more and more loosely based on the KH world, and much much more complex. The other day, a friend said something about writing it down, so it gave me the idea to Write a Story about it, which i don't think i'm too bad at, either. so yeah, i believe you'd call it a "Fan-Fic" or something like that. I won't have time to write the entire thing up in one go A because i dont have much time to do things like this anyway and B because i don't even know what i'll be writing about until it gets to it, i'll be improvising. Just a note before i write anything, i hadn't even thought about giving names to any of the characters until like 10 minutes ago. Well, just another way to Express my Creative side! Enjoy ------------ Part One - Revenge As the evening descended from the sky, it cast an impenetrable dark orange glow on the world. Peace reigned supreme all over the entire universe, it seemed. All the life energy perfectly synchronised everywhere. Suddenly the harmony was interrupted, and nature's perfect balance was destroyed. A Bird, flying calmly around the place, took a sharp exit from its seemingly endless looping, and landed near a blurred form on the floor.The area was a bleak Desert, with the odd Rock here and there. The bird examined the Blur for a moment, but hastily returned to it's routine, far, far away from the blurred figure. The figure wasn't a bush, or a tree like the bird had suspected, but a man. It was a young man, around 20, and he was laying on the floor, dead. As the final tear from his battered and bruied face finally hit the floor, it burst into radiant waves of energy, and the Man was gone. In his place was another man, a different one. This one stood firm and upright, posed heroically, and looking skyward. in his eyes were centuries of darkness, lonliness and Pain. But he hid this from himself. He closed those eyes, he grinned, and laughed. He was Happy. after all those years, he'd finally escaped. He looked around at the hole in which his weapon was once set. Expecting to see one thing, he saw another. But it didn't matter. revenge was the only thing his mind was set on, since all those years ago. A tear almost escaped from his deep Green eye, but before it could, he transformed his pure emotion into a deep hate. Emotion. How could he, of all people feel emotion. We wasn't supposed to feel what he did, and he Stood deep in thought. The man's own rage confused Even himself. Why these, of all emotions? This Ignorance began to build up an even greater fury, and before long, he triggered his own memory. He bottled up his anger, and walked over to his New weapon. He quickly picked it up, and examined it. His eyes once again scanned his own brain for the answers he longed for. Nothing. Just nothing. A Rip opened up in the air, and The man turned to walk through it, into his destiny. he knew it. He was halfway into the vivid light When a memory was thrust into his Mind. He Exclaimed in a harsh, mid-toned Voice: "Keyblade..." He journeyed on through the dense Light. ~To be continued NOTE: There are a few, completely Different time zones in this story. i'm stuck for what to do, should i continue with one until it's plot is finished, or write about a different one every time, or what? one of them has Different characters in it, too. lolz ao liek any comment? should i even bother continuing?