I've written a story but i cant think of anything else to continue the story. Plz help with the story! Im rly stuck! thnx sooooo much! Heres the story. it has no title either: ‘Layce? Are you okay? What are you staring at? Oh, not him again!’ Gemma sighed ‘Huh? What happened?’ I sat up with a jerk. Lily giggled and Gemma sighed again. They were always doing that. Just then, the bell rang for class. ‘Come on!’ Lily jumped up, still full of energy from P.E, ‘We’re going to be late for Music!’ I’ve always hated Music but today we were singing. That’s what I love to do. Gemma can’t sing at all but she is really good at guitar and Lily’s better at the drums then any of us will ever be. We all walked along the hallway to Music. Kids rushing to class and others just standing there doing nothing apart from talking to their friends. I saw him again. The same one as before. I can’t remember his name yet but he is so perfect in every way
Okay.... Well first of all you need to position this better, it looks like everything is jumbled together. Secondly, your descriptions need to be somewhat more detailed. This doesn't mean: 'She had brown hair and blue eyes' it means you have to describe them in a way for the reader to familiarize. Thirdly, this is too short, but if you're a begginer it is passable, but just barely. Fourthly, This story is aiming for romance? If it is you just condemed your own story to fail. Why? Well, it's simple really...once you see the girl saying "He's perfect in every way" you almost 99% Securely know that the story will be about how she loves him + Supernatural beings(most of the time vampires or magic) Lastly, do not ask around for help in a demeaning way, SPECIALLY BY DOUBLE POSTING. It only makes you seem desperate. Try to read some other stories, ones in KHV are good, but look for ones with actual ability. I reccomend starting by reading some stuff by Aura and Ghost. Think about where you wish to take the story next and then add more stuff.
You want to know how to continue this? Ask yourself this: What story are you trying to tell? You have obviously created this paragraph with meaning, therefore you have a story that you wish to tell. If you honestly can't think of anywhere to go with four lines of dialogue and 2 sentences of description...
