Traditional Art An awkard drawing..

Well...I'm not excatly sure if it's a ninja but I'm guessing that was what I was trying to draw. I could have probably done WAY better. But oh well. So...Does anybody have any advice on it.

 

I think it's looks really good. And you did a great job on overlapping the different people.

 

Cool. I likw the one with the dagger. X3

 

hey that was pretty cool i give it thumbs up x 100000

 

The girl on the right side of the page has some prportions to fix. Her upper body is too big for her lower body. Take a little amount off of the chest and make the head smaller. Overall it can use some shading in areas like where the neck meets the head. The clothing could use some detailing too so it doesnt seem flat. Shading and adding 'folds' to the clothes would fix that.
Its not awkward at all. Youre a great artist :D Keep working on it.

 

its not bad its better then anything I can do thats for sure

 

Thanks ^^.
And yeah...I know I have to work on making bodies and my detail. :sweatdrop:

 

HOLY! O.O

That's really awesome!!!
I LOVE it. And plus I do that ALOT! Drawing something really random. xD

 

O.o...Thanks KairiXRiku. It's good to know I'm not the only person who draws random things. ^^

 

I LOVE THE FOX. Or what ever, it still is gorgeous. I think some drawings are a bit...hmm, smushed, they aren't as proportioned. The writing is very nice. I LOVE YOUR EYES ><

hehe. I really like your drawing. I wish I couldput mine, but my scanner is a HARD CORE pain in the but.

 

Thanks. I think it's supposed to be a demon. It was the first thing I drew on that paper...And then things got out of hand.

>.< Agh..I know what you mean. Some scanners are so annoying.