Alone.

I stand in the crossroad.
Watching the clouds pass by.
Where do I belong.
REJECTED BY LIFE.
REJECTED BY DEATH.
I stand alone.
at my crossrroads between joy and pain
heaven and hell.
Life and death
in an endless stream
alone.

The grass sways peacefully.
In the field of my crossroad.
In an endless stream of the now.
With nowhere to go.
Nothing to see.
No future, no past
Just me.
All alone.
In my crossroad.

 

Wow, you're really good. I love how you incorporated the crossroads into the lines. If you meant it to be about Roxas, it was amazing how you described his feelings in that way. If you meant it to be about someone else, ignore what I just said but you still did awesome.

 

y'know,that is exactly how i feel about life.

 

Well, I was trying to make a poem describing the song bring me to life: by evanescence. And I tried to link with Roxas and KH

I made it at the same time as this one

 

Hmmm...
I liked this one alot. Especially the whole cross road tied into it!

=D