here is another poem i wrote quite a while ago i'm not really happy with it because i think it sucks but what is your opinion???? In my life there is a path in which I walk alone. I have no one beside me and am always on my own. Everytime I fall I have no one to whom I can turn. Mistakes and heartbreaks are all I will ever learn. I wish to have someone to catch me when I fall. A person that is there everytime I call. My life is a big blank where everything stays the same. I was not always like this and he is the one to blame. He came and all he did was break my heart into pieces. I was condemend to do as he pleases. Scarred and hurt was the way in which he left me. I guess we were just never meant to be. My looks were all he had ever admired. But of them he eventually got tired. He left me all alone and miserable. So long was this yet the pain is still visible. Now I have no one left except you, So tell me you will be my friend and that all of this is true. I know that you love me and I'm sorry because I can't love you back. It is because of him that love is what I lack. Sorry you had to be second but please please don't go. I need you in my life now that it is so cold.
yeah i post my poems on another site and if i see that people kind of like them then i post them here to see what other poeple think
thanks every1 i'm glad you liked me poem i seriously think i'm a sucky writer but writing is the really the only way i'm able to express my self so i try but either way thanks :)
