The contrast is kinda icky. Brick walls are made useless by being too dark. Text hard to read in some areas. Smokey spots on her legs are gross, though I dunno if that was intended. Try making the contrast smoother and easier on the eyes.
I would brighten up the focal point of your image, as well as make the text either a different color/shade or at least in a position that it is easier to read. The brick makes it a little difficult to do so. :3 Other than that, I think you did a good job. (:
