All for nothing?

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Was all I've all for nothing
    Have I just be wasting my time
    Throwing my life away for something
    That mean nothing.

    How will I know if it's all worth it
    Or am I the one who is just worthless
    Forever lost in this confuseion
    I may never find the answer I am looking for.

    Won't you show me
    Reasure me
    That all of this has a reason
    That doesn't mean nothing.

    All thoses I have saved
    Thoses who I have protected
    Was is all just a lie
    Or is it what needed to be done?

    Even if it's all for nothing
    I will keep on going
    I will now stop
    No matter how confuesed I get.

    In my time of need.

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    Well now this is one if not my longist poems ever, I got this idea from two things.
    The game final fantasy 8 and the line Sora says in Kingdom hearts 2. So enjoy people
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    I know this feeling... v-v

    Very well written as always! =D

    I wish I could do poetry...! XD;
     
  3. Azure Flame Banned

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    Beautiful! Great job sis!
     
  4. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That's a really great poem sis. I can relate to the content at times as well. So cool. :)
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank you three glad you like it and foxxi, just write what you feel I'm sure you can write a poem
     
  6. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Nice poem!! Well written and it's simple. Besides, I relate to the content in the poem.. But, it's still a really nice poem. Good job!!
     
  7. Nexit@h XIV King's Apprentice

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    It's lovely!! Great!! For some reason...I just looooove your poems!! They're fantastic Anniexo!
    ...I just can't think of anything to write...I have no imagination at all....xDDD
    One more time, this it a great poem!! :)
     
  8. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Lovely poem. I liked it alot.
     
  9. Zexion13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Great poem! I realy enjoyed it. :D

    Any poem I write turns out to be a childish kind of poem so I stick to writing stories. Not very good at that either, though.

    It is a great talent to write a poem and express what you feel, and then have other people go, "I know exactly what you mean and I can relate to that."

    Keep on writing!:)