Traditional Art Alice Cullen..

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Tootsie, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. Tootsie coquí

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    Gotta love her <3

    So,my last drawing wasn't so good and I took some advice and BAM:
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    I drew this some weeks ago,the shoulders are kind of messed up :< and so is the hair but I'm pleased with the way I drew her eyes..

    Cnc my friends :]
     
  2. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    The ribbon on the side is kind of plain. Her arm thats on her chest it goes out to far when you drew the wrist part. Poportions are a bit off. Her chin needs to go a little bit to the right. But it looks awesome :D mostly the shading
     
  3. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    oo. This looks awesome Tootsie!!

    I love your shading, the hair could be more darker, since her hairs is supposed to be really black. The bow is a bit small, a bit lighter and bigger.

    The rest is great. Great job :D
     
  4. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    You know... I think you have improved some after your latest art, bravo! :3 Keep it coming! I think the camera may have been in minor movements so it plays around with the lineart much more than it should. :x *hates camera movements, gets it all the time*

    Well yeah - Devil's Angel spotted some things, so I've got nothing. Only thing I would suggest today... If you are to add shadows somewhere, add it in the hair. It's the part of the body most hidden so it should have a shadow where the darkest part is, it will make the girl look less flat. Though I like the simplicity over the shading so I'd want to keep that. :>
     
  5. Tootsie coquí

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    Thanks for the CnC and yes,I'm very careful when it comes to the shading.

    Yeah I know,her hair is really black but I was too afraid to stain the paper :I!
    Thanks :D

    Yeah I've been practicing a lot lately x3 and about the shadow the hair thing,I'll try it out in my next drawing B:
     
  6. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    i swear

    you are my idol <33333

    I <3 this picture of Alice, it looks just like the book would describe her.
    the hair and the clothes would match her just right
     
  7. amythest Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow it looks really good! the proportians are off a little, you have probably already heard that, and you should move the chin to the right otherwise it looks like she is jutting it out. i reallly love the hair like you said :D and the clothes are realy cool too! it looks really great keep it up :)
     
  8. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    I'll add my little useless motivation +1 comment: it's really cute xD

    Though I'll reiterate Coco's point about the shading, make it look less flat. But nice going~

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