Video After quitting for a few months, I am now back into video editing.

Hello, fellow video editors/film-makers of KH-Vids, I have returned after my somewhat slight "inactivity".
Anyways, to the point.

I am back into video-editing, but not amvs, but more-so filmmaking. I have moved on from editing Kingdom Hearts and am developing a new base for my editing/films...and what I plan to move onto are short-films(once I get my HD Camera).
So, with that being said, I have a minor obsession with color correction and have created a new channel called CozmicFilmz, which I will be uploading my new videos on.

My current video can be viewed here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-vh_9nJd5Yc
View in 720p and constructive criticism please!

What I aim for is original concepts, and a somewhat laid back, vintage-style, and somewhat dark films.
Any advice on how I can approve would be greatly appreciated.