Advent Chaos

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  1. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    A new story in Creative Corner's everywhere!
    Storyline----
    Set after the events in COM but whilr Sora is still sleeping in that little test tube. Sora is asleep, and in his wake has left 5 Organization members dead or defeated. Riku has left Castle Oblivion as well, leaving two more members dead. One being seeks to take control of the insuing confusion by exploiting both Organization XIII and Riku. Now, Riku and Mickey and everyone will be caught up in a storm of Chaos.
    Storyline----

    Riku and Mickey was walking along a path. Or, to be exact, a path to "dawn".
    Really, Riku didn't even know where he was going, but any stopping would be proving that Diz guy right. And Riku didn't want that. So he just kept walking . Suddenly, they were approached by a figure. And the thing was, he was dressed in the same robe's they were. Which was kinda kinky, if anyone asked Mickey. So they stopped. And so did the guy.
    " Well,well,well, it seems that we meet earlier than expected, Riku " the person said.
    " Who are you? And how do you know my name? " Riku asked.
    " Who am I? I'm a creature of darkness, as are you. And as for how I know your name, well, my master told me." the figure replied bored-like.
    " I meant your name." Riku was tempted to say der-der-der, but saved it.
    " My name? My name the dead need not know. However, I'm very... interested in you, shall we say. Interested in take your hearts and summon giant killer bringer of destruction with them kind of way."
    When some one says that to you, you either run or draw weapons.
    Riku and Mickey chose the second option. Even with Soul Eater and a Keyblade pointed at him the guy didn't seem scared. Then again, if you didn't know what the keyblade was, then you would hardly be scared at what seemed like an oversized key. Then again, this figure knew what the keyblade was. And he still seemed amused by it.
    " So you think weapons like those pathetic things are a match for me do you? How extremely wrong you are. You people put too much faith in weapons and less in...... darkness!!!"
    At that last word, he puffed his chest out like Lexaeus and Ansem and sent out a tremendous wave of darkness at them both. Not even Riku's new power or the King's light could sheild them against the wave that poured out. Not even Ansems darkness was this strong or foul, Riku realized. As he was blown away, Riku distinctly heard laughter.
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    Another dark cloaked figure walked long a cliff. This figures name was X. He gazed out over an endless sea. Sighing, he created a Corridor of Darkness and stepped through.
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    It seems like Its doing good. More detail, is all I have to say
     
  3. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh..... alright, I'm making chapter 2 as I speak! Or not, but ,um, I'll be making it soon.