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  1. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    WARNING-May contain some suggestive material...but fit's the PG-13 code

    *theres a more Explict verison...but not gonna show it..unless you really wanna see it >.>*

    This is part two of the BOY TOY poem story.


    Smother, Scream, Tears…I run, but you force me down onto the bed. I Scream, but you smother me in your vulgar kisses, Stop, Stop, Stop!…But you say Go, Go, Go!. My vision turns Rose red, something so innocent, but so disgusting. Holler, Moan, Fight, Roar. Why cant you just go away? Tears are flowing forever in my soul, Because of your dammed desire. Laughing because you think it's fun, but you can never see the pain I am in..Hate you forever, Can never trust. Never Forgive and forget.
     
  2. Day~Dream Kingdom Keeper

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    that kinda made me scared a little.

    you have a gift. That gift is to write.
     
  3. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    O__O really? Wow...i geuss you understand what it ment..it's a girls story, and boy toys is a guys..

    But the two people meet though
     
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    I didn't understand that last part. I though it was the guy that got raped, unless it's the girl that's telling the story.
     
  5. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Copy the part and i'll tell you, but it's the girl who got raped
     
  6. Day~Dream Kingdom Keeper

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    really!?

    this part?
     
  7. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    That's the whole thing XD
     
  8. Day~Dream Kingdom Keeper

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    then which part are u talking about, cuz there are many parts Rayku.
     
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    This poem is the girls Expereance...The Boy's Was BOY TOY..get it?
     
  10. Kites Chaser

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    You're really talented Rayku.
    I reallyy like this one and the title "Advantage" fits perfectly.
    Continue to write, you've got a skill :)
     
  11. Day~Dream Kingdom Keeper

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    errr, no.

    so the boy AND the girl got raped?
     
  12. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you, i plan to write more.


    Yes...the boy was MOLESTED as a child..

    And the girl was..date raped..