A song I'm writing for my boyfriend

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  1. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    So, here's the thing. I'm writing this for my boyfriend Wes, but I won't give it to him until his graduation day. Which is like next year.

    Once you read it, you'll probably know why. And yes, it sounds weird for a girl to ask a guy that, but oh well...by the way, this is all I've got so far. I have to make it perfect.



    Verse 1:

    I'm so glad that you're here right now
    Boyfriend, girlfriend, nothing can tear us down
    But something's bothering me, and I'm worried to death
    Please stay for a little while, don't go just yet
    Nothing's wrong, I've just been thinking
    Of everything we've been through, and everything we could be
    Will you...

    Chorus 1:

    Marry me, marry me?
    Baby please, baby please
    I don't, I don't
    Want you to leave
    I love you, I love you
    There's nothing else I can do
    I'm so afraid of losing you

    Verse 2:

    I know we're young, but I'm certain we'll make it
    I just wanna be with you, fall asleep and wake up in your arms
    Through every kiss and every hug that made up for every fight
    Trust me, if we stick together, our future will turn out just fine
    Yes, it sounds so scary (Yet I keep wishing for it to come true)
    But please don't reconsider, it's the best thing for me and you
    Will you...

    Chorus 2:

    Marry me, marry me?
    It's killing me, killing me
    I can't watch, I can't watch
    You walk away
    It feels like, feels like
    Eternity, eternity
    Until I get to see your face again
     
  2. scarred_heart634 Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow that's really cute!! i think it's really good to, I don't thnk you should change anything about it! it'd super cute and a really cool thing to do good luck with it!
     
  3. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thanks.

    My friends keep asking me if I'm for real about it, and this one girl in my homeroom said if I ask him that and we do get married, I'm gonna be called a skank.

    The girls in my 3rd period told me to ignore her and tell her to shut up.
     
  4. scarred_heart634 Traverse Town Homebody

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    well you shouldn't listen to that girl, if you think your ready to marry the guy then i think it's ok :)
     
  5. Jayn

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    This is the sweetest thing ever ._.

    I really like it. I don't see anything wrong with it if it's sincere.


    I hope everything goes well ^^​
     
  6. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    You do know guys think about different things than girls , right?

    the song in itself is good....so you're gonna wait till last time in high-school, right?

    Well, i'm not very optimistic about this, but I hope it goes allright?