A scarred Tragedy...Roxas's story, Chapter 1

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  1. Sce13 Banned

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    A Scarred Tragedy… Roxas’s Story

    Okay, before you read this, I got the idea of making this story by watching he new MTV seies Scarred...It was really awesome they way they did tricks, I thought, "Hey, I'm gonna write a story about this..."


    Chapter One

    Roxas and Axel always hanged around the skate park…Everyone loved watching their skateboarding moves, bike riding moves, and roller blading moves, and sometimes would even catch some of it on film…

    Axel and Roxas were walking around the castle getting ready to head for the skate park.., but instead of wearing their organization coats, they wore jeans and short sleeved punk shirts to the skate parks… Same with everyone else except Larxene, she skated on roller blades with short shorts and a baby tee. She always wore her hair up in a pony tail while skating… All the boys loved to watch her when she skated…
    “What kind of Tricks are we going to do today?†Axel asked…
    “Hmm…What about getting a bike and doing some back flips…I’m getting bored of doing Ollies and Tail Grabs for today,†Roxas answered…
    “Okay, sure…†Axel said while opening the garage door…Inside was about 20 to 30 bikes, 20 roller blades, and about 40 skateboards…
    Roxas grabbed his skull skateboard, his skull bike and his skull roller blades… He ties the roller blades together and threw them over his shoulder and but his skateboard in his bag… he then got on his bike…Axel did the same with his black and white skateboard, bike, and roller blades… They both rode their bikes down to the skate park, full of ramps, rails, and large bowls…(I think that’s what they are called).
    They both put their gear on a nearby pick nick table…
    “Ready to shred?†Roxas asked…
    “Don’t we need our gear?†Axel asked…
    “We will be fine,†Roxas suggested…
    “Alrighty then, let’s go shred!†Axel yelled… They both got on their bikes and started riding…They did some rail grinds and some twists, until Xaldin, Lexaus, and Marluxia came by with all their gear…
    “Hey guys!†Axel said while on his bike… Everyone just stared at Axel…
    “What do you think you’re doing?†asked Marluxia…
    “Umm…I’m riding my bike…What are you doing?†Axel asked…
    “Okay, don’t smart of with us…It’s our turn to use to park…†Xaldin said…
    Axel looked at the 3 madly…
    “It’s not even 3 o’clock yet…†Roxas said coming down off a ramp…
    Marluxia, Lexaus and Xaldin looked at Roxas…
    “We need to practice,†Lexaus said…
    “You don’t get this park until its 3:00,†Axel said… Xigbar showed up next to the three standing at the top…
    “What’s going on guys?†Xigbar asked…
    “These guys are trying to get us out and it’s not even their turn yet…†Roxas complained…
    Xigbar turned to look at the three…
    “Okay, you know Xemnas said that we have to come up with a time…
    Roxas, Axel, Larxene, Zexion, Luxord and me get it until 3:00…Then you get it until 6:00…†Xigbar said…
    “Come on Xigbar, don’t be such a baby,†Xaldin said…
    “Alrighty, you want this place so bad…We will play you for it,†Roxas said…
    “Ha! You got to be kidding me,†Xaldin said…
    “Who is going to compete?†Maa asked…
    “For our turn, I will…†Roxas said…
    Xaldin looked at the others and they nodded at him…
    “Okay, and for our turn, I will,†Xaldin said…
    “No chickening out,†Roxas said...
    Axel rode over towards Roxas…
    “Man, are you sure about this?†Axel asked… Roxas stared at Axel…
    “I think I can handle this,†Roxas said looking at Axel…
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    NICE!!!! This should be good. ITs like a dance off but with skateboards.......

    Pm me when your next one comes out. I WANA READ IT!:D :D :D
     
  3. IWuvshZexion Merlin's Housekeeper

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    lmao!! I've only read the first chapter and im hooked!!
    *waits for next chapter* :D
     
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