Note: This is written in perspective of Riku to Kairi at the very end of Chain of Memories. I know, first and second stanza's need help. You'll never begin to understand; You'll never be able to comprehend: The lonliness that befalls me. Pushing away this emotion, I put my body into motion. And though I travel on my own, I know I'll never truly be alone. I fight back the darkness that I was once engulfed in; I bring back the memories of my kin. The one who always follows his heart; The one I've been jealous of from the start. I find myself forced to make a choice, And all I do is remember your voice. I do as you advisded me to: I take the road of which I never knew. As I take a step closer to my fate, As I cleanse myself of anger and hate, I know that because of you: I can do what I have to. I can be both dark and light; You, being the fire that fuels my fight. I sit here and think: What would happen, had we not shared this link? You've helped me relinquish the monster inside me, You've shown me what I can truly be. So I travel down this road, Embracing the dark, Yet finding my light. And I know that one night, When my exsistence should come to an end, You'll be the last thing in my sight.
Why thank you. =D I really need to start writing more often, though. With school and everything I don't have much time. :/
Favorite Part of the Poem. That was a very well written poem. I liked a certain part of it.. err.. here: This was my favorite part. Other than that, I wish I had the talent to write a poem like this. Good job. 'Tis excellent. <3
Brava Misty this is a lovely poem which has made me need a tissue (don't count the fact I have a bad cold to that statement). it's creative inprising and very good use of rhymes.
You're Welcome. ^_^ I know what you mean... school. -__-; By all means post more of your work; I would love to see it. :D
