Traditional Art A random drawing....

of a Heartless(Shadow) and Nobody(Dusk) with writing its just a random drawing

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb261/cobrademon/randomdrawing2.jpg

Sorry I had to make a new thread the picture stretched the page on the other one

 

that's a pretty sweet pic. The theme and topic is pretty neat. My only suggestion would b making the dusk bigger cuz they are naturally larger than shadow heartlesses.

 

ill think of that next time THANKS!

 

Uh, you didnt' have to make a new thread. You could've just edited your post.

Anyway...the proportions for everything, including the symbols themselves are way off. <_<; The regular heartless' head tends to be slightly bigger (or just as large) as its body. At that, it's hunched over. His right arm looks fairly thicker than the left arm anyway.

I can't really be arsed to crit the nobody, but just know that the head's also slightly bigger. Observe their structure from pictures.

Yeah, that's it I think.

 

ok will do and yes i did cause i couldnt edit the other post