A poem I wrote...it has no title...

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 26, 2007.

  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    You look through me,
    Like crystal glass.
    You treat me like nothing,
    Not even trash.

    Why won’t you notice?
    Why won’t you care?
    What can I do?
    To prove that I’m there?

    If I bruise my skin,
    If I shed a tear,
    If I cut my face,
    Will it prove that I’m here?

    If I shoot up drugs,
    If I slit my wrists,
    If I cause myself pain,
    Will it prove I exist?

    And although I hurt,
    No matter what I try,
    I’m still…not living…
    In your oblivious eyes…

    So maybe if I hurt,
    So maybe if I cry,
    Just maybe if I was dead,
    It’d prove I was alive.

    btw, this IS NOT from my view!!! This is from the view of someone who hates life. I love life very much :D I was just writing from another view.

    Thank you for reading :)
     
  2. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    That was a really good poem!

    It was really deep

    But even if it's not about you, it is scary

    If it is about you and you just don't want anyone to know, you need help don't feel like no one care because I am sure that there are people who care about you!
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol relax! Its not about me :) But thank you for being concerned about me :D
     
  4. zexionXienzo6 Traverse Town Homebody

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    good thing you said that on the bottom i was gonna say "are you emo?" but i can see you're not. GREAT POEM!