a Poem I just wrote...

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Bubble Master Califa, Oct 11, 2007.

  1. Bubble Master Califa Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well i had a knack for this a while ago and recent things have made me decide to write this for someone... I'd like people to read it and give their opinion on the poem as honestly as they can.

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    Many things I could say.

    Many things I feel.

    Many things I wish.

    Many more I dream.

    But from all of those things; there's only three words I really wanna say...



    ...I love you.



    I always will no matter what.

    Be it as a lover or not.

    Be us friends or maybe not.

    I just wanna say this to you...



    ...I love you.



    I care about you in a deep way.

    I hardly know you so little I can say.

    But I do want to know you yet not in the sexual way.

    All because my heart says to me...



    ...that I love you.

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    I left the title out because I'm going to send it to the person I really care about and don't want him to know that i asked for other peoples opinions on it.