There's something about the bottom part of the arm I don't like. I know that reflection of objects is greatly importaint, but it's just something I didn't like. I think the reason may be that the skin ended up with more reflection of the red than the metal/iron part on his shoulder. Either try to weaken the arm's reflection or add more on his outfit, mainly on armour. Other than that, the sig is well composed - and I have no idea why there's a white line to the right.
its very nice but the white bar stands out too much. maybe a bit darker, or just take it out =] rate: 8/10
Thanks guys. The white bar is a classic sig effect. And this tag seemed a bit wierd with the black border so...tried something different. I especially love the concept with the flowers. It's full of depth as far as I can see. So smexy man lawl. Cocohints, what do you mean actually? Reflection...I really didn't make anything reflect. Can you make it a bit clearer, thanks ^_^ Spitz, the foreground is a good idea. But most of my tags have too much empty space on it so I decided to change that on this. However it can be changed, thanks for the suggestion. Sanctuaryheaven, it was an experiment. I'll gladly take it off and see how it looks, thanks ^_^ Clouddart100, read this; http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216 kthxbai Anymore comments plz? C'mon guys :[[
I love this tag, the only thing I would say is that you add a little of FG effects to the low right like Spitfire said.
Thanks man. Helps ^_^ Btw; Learning Rights PSD right here: http://rapidshare.com/files/70475728/zack.psd.html PM for .xcf =\
It was this red colour here I meant: It's like the only spot on him that has a reflection effect, to me it demands that the parts of the body closer to the red light should get some colour too. But don't take me too seriously, I'm crazy and stuff. :> I can only observe when it comes to graphic sigs.
I see what you mean dude. I felt that the pink part on the left was more of a detail and nothing over him. The floral parts do look like there a bit depth'd on, to me. But I'll try to add more shadowing to all of it thanks ^_^
Text is horrible, try fixing that. Take the burn tool to his lower arm, it'll darken it up. Either that or put something behind it ont he bottom to make up for the lack of consistency. With the white vine things, don't use an eraser tool, it just makes things look blurry and bad. I'd suggest using a rendering technique. Zoom in about as far as you can, take out the polygonal lasso tool, and use that to cut out the everything that you want, instead of erasing it. Then to add some depth, blur just a bit using the blur tool, and sharpen near the bottom to make even more depth. Also, colors need a bit of work. The red is all right, but it's not wonderful, and it's the only thing that makes the tag look alright. I'd suggest putting the red under a wave and liquifying it, then use the rendering technique I told you about before to add more depth and flow. Then take away that bad text on his arm and put some white text over the red part now. Maybe include a symbol with it? Take away the white bar, it's not a border, far from it, it's just distracting. Also, lighting, lighting, lighting. Need lighting. I see you were trying to use the red blob for that. *Hits you with newspaper*. No, bad. Add a lighting affects layer. Finish off with a gradient map to finish up the coloring. And if you want to, try turning into a BW sig. I think it'll be good like that.
Um... >_> <_< I use GIMP. Half the **** you said I can't do xD Or don't know how. I meant to make the text like that dude, I was planning on making it more natural. Most of my tags have had that "text space" in some part in the tag. I suck witht the lassos lol. Thanks for the cnc man. Great heLp.
The depth is amazing. Great job on it. The only slight problem is the white bar and the purple/pink color on the right. Otherwise, nice job!
Daaayumm. Thanks guys. Yeah, I guess the white sucked. 15 posts on this topic? Dammnn. I've only had one or two on the recent ones. Thanks a bunch peepz.
