A little Poem (Homework)

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  1. Saix Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Hearty Heather heads headward down hill,
    Skilling skullfully but starts to still,
    She slows stops but stumbles,
    Trips twice thrice and tumbles,
    Shouts and scared stiff and still sounding shrill.

    Opinions? Just for a homework assignment.
     
  2. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Plink, plank, plonk
    Splish, splash, splosh
    Onomatopoeia
    Is a load of tosh


    Onomatopoeia poems are hard as hell, and I think you've hit the nail on the head there :3
    Love it