A Kingdom Hearts Story

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  1. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    Just give me a character and I'll somehow work him into KH.
     
  2. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Mexofina, a warrior of the keyblade.
     
  3. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    Hmmm alright then
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    Mexofina stood near the top of The World That Never Was thinking about how she was going to deal with Xemnas. Her Keyblade was powerul but she needed a strategy. But every plan she came up with had a weakness. She stopped thinking and decided to improvise. She was never the intellectual type.
     
  4. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey thats pretty good! Keep going!
     
  5. Arch Mana Knight

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    Hmmm...interesting...I wonder if you'll keep writing. Meh. *contributes*

    Alaric, keyblade master. He stopped trying to be a hero...

    Rawr...*wonders if the guy who made this comes back*
     
  6. godsgirl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Rei, Riku's GF. (sorry fangirls, he asked me first lol. jealous?)
     
  7. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    I think this is the wrong section but meh.

    Tristan- a loner who seeks revenge from Xigbar for killing his sister and searches for a cure for his brother who is going to die.
     
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    Jackylyn, a spazzy gummi ship builder from Halloween Town?
     
  9. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    Alrighty then.
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    Jackylyn landed her ship and Tristan and Alaric got out with her. They were ready to take down the Organization. "I really don't see the point in this." Alaric said looking bored.

    "Shut up Alaric! You know what this means to me!" Tristan responded staring him right in the eyes.

    "C'mon guys let's not do this again." Jackylyn said standing between them. They had continuesly fought over this subject again, and again, and again. Even back in Halloween Town. So they both began walking leaving Jackylyn behind again. They always left her behind. So she did what she always did. She thought. Jackylyn decided to once again try to create a cure for Tristan's brother. She always felt so bad. Meanwhile Tristan and Alaric were barely 1/4 of the way through TWTNW when they were ambushed by a huge storm of Nobodies. Alaric pulled out his Keyblade, the Oblivion. While Tristan pulled out a pair of nunchaku. They stood back to back spinning in circles to defeat all of the opponents.

    During all this Rei sat with Riku in a small sheltered area somewhere between where Mexofina was and where Tristan and Alaric were battling the Nobodies. "Rei I just can't let you come with me anymore it's too dangerous." Riku said to her.

    "Well I'm coming anyways!" She replied.

    "Alright but be careful." He said giving up. They started towards the top of the castle once more.
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    OK all that was just to make up for me not checking in!
     
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    sweet! Oblivion...w00t. Good writing. Keep it up.
     
  11. Flamedancer Twilight Town Denizen

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    Dude...you rock...this is amazing!
     
  12. godsgirl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    awwww! Riku DOES care. lol, write some more, youre good!
     
  13. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    nunchucks...hm....not what I had imagined but cool!
     
  14. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    keep writing!
     
  15. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Yeah, its in the wrong section. Try the creativity corner. Many people do what your doing.
     
  16. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    oh sorry then.
     
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    You can continue though...Unless you want to contact a mod to move this to a different section(creativity corner).
     
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    Well for now I'll continue but I'll get it moved later
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    While they were fighting Alaric put away his Keyblade and began charging his energy. "Tristan cover me!" He said. Tristan nodded and moved closer so as to protect him from the Heartless for whatever he was doing. When his move was charged he said: "You might wanna move." Tristan pushed his way through the wave of Heartless and took cover. "DARK BLADE!!!" He yelled. Suddenly a huge blade at least three times the size of Alaric materialized out of the darkness and landed in his hand. He rested on his shouder for a moment. Then in one swing all the Heartless were gone. The blade dissapeared and Alaric knelt down for a moment, breathing hard.

    "And that was?" Tristan asked.

    "One of my most powerful techniques." He replied standing but still not breathing evenly. So they continued on with the huge castle in sight and more determination then ever.
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    Mexofina came apon the huge door at the top of the castle and tried to open it with her Keyblade. Strangely it didn't open. She sighed. She knew this would happen. Mexofina knew she needed at least two other Keyblade weilders. But where would she find two more?

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    During all of this Riku and Rei continued on their path through TWTNW. "Hey Riku?" Rei asked.

    "Yeah?" He replied.

    "What's Destiny Island like?" She had asked this many times.

    "Ugh for the last time it's a beautiful place surrounded by a small ocean where if you catch the sunset is astonishing." He sighed. "I only wish I could be there now."

    "Don't worry we'll be there soon enough!" She said. Rei always liked to keep on the bright side.
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    Jackylyn on the other hand was busy mixing more ingredients into a small pot. She hoped this would work.
     
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    Hmm...Tomorrow it should get moved...but good writing! Continue with your awesomeness.
     
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    i love it, keep going!
     
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