******************* Why I must be a copy? This isn´t fair, I won´t accept this But life isn´t fair But why he must everything, when I have nothing at all My father betrayed me He threw me in a cell, and left me here I was alone for years, Rusting there Until I was released, with a desire, Of revenge, and an intense wrath I may be a copy, I may be a machine But I have emotions, I will have revenge, for not seeing them in me Why I must be just a shadow? To not have a heart, and be in the inside with nothing, hollow I am machine, I am just a can full of chips and screws Now I can see it clear, for a fake, life is not fair Why, tell me why you have a better life? Tell me, you can´t see my pain? No, you are too distracted with your friends Now you will see my revenge I am just a stupid and rusty can A can full of scraps Why you can´t understand? Why you can´t see I only want a friend? Nothing else Why the Destiny must be so cruel with me? Why I must be a cold and heartless machine? I am just a shadow, nothing In the shadows I am lurking He has everything he wants, with friends and all When I have nothing, not even a stone to talk You don´t understand How´s to be a fake, only a machine that has no heart ******************* I based it on a character of a game.
Hmm interesting poem, But i won't lie, the wording really wasn't my favorite because it was in incomplete sentences. Does the character you based this on communicate in that way? If so then I can understand, but the poem has a strong sense of righting the wrong and I like the wording you have chosen. Only other comment is that this line: Has cell spelled wrong.
Yes, he kinda communicates in that way, or is the way I thought he would communicate if he writed the poem, is been a long time since I wrote a poem, and I am trying my best ._., and thanks, I´ll fix that.
