Under lock and Key Some secrets REALLY should be KEPT secret. : By: iFishy Name: Ankoku Ikami Maaka (Koko, or Ani) Age: 18 Birthday: October 31st Height: 5’2” Weight: 82lbs Hair color: white (albino chick :D) Eye color: blood red “Size”: C36 Blood type: O+ Personality: Kind, gentle, polite (to most people), a bit short tempered, prone to panic, gamer, fan of Kingdom Hearts, likes sweets, likes to sleep in, a bit cat-like. “Last box!” yelled one of the movers. Finally! No more boxes!!!! I thought to myself “Whoa, I wonder who’s moving in…” I heard one of the nosey neighbors across the street say. Geez. People really need to mind their own business. I walked into my now fully unpacked four-bedroom home. The swing on the porch gave it just the little pizzazz it needed. “Why do we have so much stuff?” I heard one of my brothers complain. “Because the house is big, and it needs to be filled with something other then hot air—unlike your head. “Well, that’s a rude remark coming from the third born in the family.” Remarked my brother, Name: Yaku Kubo Maaka Age: 23 Birthday: December 24th Height: 5’7” Weight: 92lbs Hair color: Black Eye color: A fairly dark blue (navy) Blood type: AB- Personality: Bratty, protective, kind-hearted, sly, mischievous, chatty “SMACK!” was the sound I heard as I saw my eldest brother hit his sibling in the back of the head with a fairly large, now dented, book. Name: Kenran Waizu Maaka Age: 24 Birthday: January 7th Height: 5’8 ½” Weight: 89lbs Hair color: white (yes, he’s albino :D) Eye color: reddish (he’s albino, remember?) Blood type: A+ Personality: Kind, loving, protective, brotherly, wise, quiet “OWW! What’d you do that for Kenran?!” whined Yaku, as he rubbed at the bump now forming at the back of his head. “Don’t make fun of Koko. SHE’S letting US live here free of charge. Don’t complain. Nice neighborhood by the way.” said the nicer of my two brothers, Kenran. “I know! I wanted EVERYTHING to be perfect. It’s my first real home, and I intend on making it absolutely dream-like.” I said with a happy look perched upon my face. Then I noticed something strange. The way Ken-nii was staring at me—different. Kenran and Yaku were part of my only family left; they were actually my 4th and 6th cousins. I was orphaned at the age of 7, and their families happily welcomed me in. We were all apart of the mysterious Maaka family. A family tailored in secrets, wealth, and blood. All of the Maaka are actually supposed to be called Chi-Maaka, but that end was cut off when my part of the family became the main branch. I’m the only left full-blooded heir to the Maaka fortune, and I plan on investing it. So MY family can live their lives in happiness too. "HELLO!!!!!” yelled Yaku in my face, as he grabbed me and tossed me over his shoulder. “I is kiddy-napping her, and dare is nothing joo can do about it!!!” Yaku yelped evilly, “Let me down you dunce!” I yelled as I pounded my captor. “OW! OW! OW! Okay! Okay! I’ll let you down!” Yaku said, rubbing the new bruises that had been formed on his back. Alas, this is the beginning of my “Wonderful” life. “BBBLLLLLEEEEEPPPPP!” went my alarm. I reached for it, only to hear someone enter my room. “I’ll turn off her alarm and let her sleep in. She deserves it… She’s worked so hard…” I heard Kenran whisper as he turned off my alarm. When I finally heard my door close, I got up and walked into the bathroom. I walked out in my kitchen clothes. I hopped down the stairs, and slipped into the kitchen. I grabbed all the ingredients I needed, and started making what my brothers would call rare. I call it—Breakfast. “Mmmm… What smells so good?” I heard Yaku mumble as he eagerly trotted down stairs. “I wonder if…” I heard Ken-nii trail off. “Oh my God! She IS making breakfast!” I heard Yaku yelp in awe. “Yes, now, close your mouth and seat yourself on the table BEFORE breakfast becomes lunch.” I happily chimed as I served the table. Kenran looked at me, the table, the food, and then at me again. He gave me a questioning glance before sitting down to eat, not wanting to be rude. I sat down with them, and started to eat. When breakfast was done and the dishes were clean, I got a call from an unknown caller. (My brothers had just left to go to the orientation for their collages.) “H-hello?” I asked, happy my brothers weren’t home to be nosey. “Is this Ankoku?” asked a somehow familiar voice. “Y-yes this is her…” I said, wondering who it was. “It’s me; Rikko… from middle school…” trailed off the girl. “R-rikko?! You mean my best friend in the history of the universe, Rikko?!” I asked, more than a bit happy. “Koko! You remembered! When I heard from someone that you moved back to Japan, I was ecstatic. ““R-really? … Did you ever get a boyfriend?” “Oh no! Not you too! Ha-ha, I did get a boyfriend, and I love him very much, thank you. What about you?” “…*silence*…” “—I’m guessing that’s a no?” “…” “Are you still there?” “Yes…” “… You’re birthday is in a week, right?” “Oh my god! I forgot! I must prepare for the little children!” “???” “Halloween? Candy and scares?” “Oh…yeah.” “Hey, Rikko, wanna spend the birthday at my house? I’m gonna be home alone, because my brothers will be at their collage trip…” “Sure! I’ll surprise you with your birthday gift… Hey, what DO you want for your birthday, Koko?” “Well, honestly… A boyfriend. But I don’t see how THAT is going to happen anytime soon…” [Rikko’s thoughts] A boyfriend, huh? Easier done than said. >:3 she’s gonna get the biggest surprise of her life for her birthday… [One week later] I awoke in the morning to the sound of banging on the door. I quickly put on some clothes and ran down stairs. I yanked open the door to find Rikko with a large, cat-like grin on her face, while she was hiding something behind her back. “Good morning, Birthday girl!” Rikko chirped, hugging me. “*yawn* Yeah. Thanks… can we, um… go inside?” “Sure.” She said, as we walked into my house, and entered the living room. “Whoa.” I heard her whisper. She passed me a small, square shaped present. “Um… a CD?” “Sorta, its PC disk. Put in your laptop.” She explained. “Okay… Is it a PC game? Because those don’t work on my laptop…” I replied, putting the disk into my laptop. (Everyone has their own laptop now.) A site called “Kronos Heaven” appeared on the screen. “Okay, now click personal Boyfriends…” Rikko said. I clicked on the tab, and a tab called “Pick a face” appeared. I raised one eyebrow at Rikko. Out of all the faces, one stood out to me, so I clicked on it. It read, “Two for One deal, yes or no?” I clicked yes. The top of the tab now read, “Gamers special, these two lovely boys Sora and Roxas have their real personalities, so that means only a few questions for you… Question #1 Would you like to have kids?” [Ankoku’s thoughts] ‘Um… a personality question? How strange… oh well.’ I clicked yes. “Question #2 Do you want a man who can take care of the house, and can cook?” Of COURSE I clicked yes. “Thank you, your shipment will be here within the month.” And then it logged me out of my computer. …I looked around, and Rikko was gone, leaving a note that read, “Hope you like your gift. Koko. I walked up stairs, fully confused about today’s occurrences. I walked to my bed, and lay my head down, waiting for sleep to come. I awoke in the morning, with the sun shining on my face. I stretched, and walked downstairs, to make myself breakfast. I was eating my bowl of cheerio’s when I heard a knock at my door. I ran to the door, curious to what or who it was at the door. I opened the door. “Yes?” I asked, looking at the UPS man. “Miss—(he looked at a piece of paper) Maaka?” “Yes? What is it?” “Your order from a—(looks at paper) Kronos Heaven?” “Wow, they deliver quick…” I mumbled, signing the paper he had stretched out towards me. “Thank you. Wow, what did you order, two refrigerators?!” He half mumbled, putting the two packages in my living room and walking out. I looked at the two, huge packages. Is this some kinda joke? I closed my eyes, putting one hand on each of the opening to the containers. Just like a band aid, Koko. 1, 2—3! I opened the containers, and two somethings fell on top of me. “Ahh!” I yelped, pushing the two heavy carcasses off of me. Are these—corpses?! I looked back at the two bodies. GAH! >///< ESE NUDA!! I looked at them, the ceiling, them again, and then I looked away, only to have something like a book fall on my head. “Ow!” I said, picking up the book, and starting to leaf through it. These are what I ordered?! I’m gonna KILL Rikko. I read a part that said. “To active your lover, kiss them on the lips.” I leafed though another part that read, “Your special edition lovers are very special…” Blah, blah, blah…. So all I have to do is… activate them? Maybe I should give them some clothes first… After the two were…dressed, I bent over the “corpse” that looked like Sora. Okay, here goes my dignity… I gave him a 2 second peck atop his velvet soft lips and then I lightly pecked the other one, which looked like Roxas. I sat in front of them, staring for a while. No movement. “Oh well.” I thought as I got up to walk away. Well, my stomach was empty! What was I supposed to do?! I rummaged through the kitchen, looking for something to eat, when I smelt something cooking. What in the…?! I turned around, and saw one of the corpses moving, and cooking something. “Good morning.” He said, smiling at me. …! “G-good morning…?” I said back, kind of confused. “Roxas! Can you get her a seat please?” I heard him holler to someone. “Okay, Sora.” I felt someone grab my hand and lead me to a seat. Did I dare to open my eyes? Sadly, yes. I peeked through one of my eyes, praying that this was all a crazy dream. They were still there. “You okay…?” Roxas questioned me. “Not really sure…” I mumbled, starting to fidget.
:3 Love it~ On a side note, you should REALLY get in the habit of spacing during paragraphs! LOVE YA LOTS LITTLE SISSY!
Go back through, edit your post with adding in the spacing that Hope critiqued and then i'll read this. Giant blocky paragraphs rarely interest readers. And watch the spam.
