Thats some hawt effects there, but whats with the blurry shoulder? that and the face duplication are killin this tag. maybe a tad too much neg space to the right side as well. keep up the work man, you have improved a lot.
It's not bad. I'm liking the clippings a bit. Work on your depth and flow. Not getting your flow right, persay, but fixing it. You blurred the shoulder on the stock. Also, you have two light sources. Try and work on not doing that. Use color balances to make one of them more of a midtone color. Besides that, not bad.
This is really cool (: I like tho colours to, I think this is pretty good. The guys exprecion is making things better to. Good work (:
