Okay peoples, CnC please. I wanna see how I'm doing. Okay, not my best, but the first 2 I did yesterday and the Vivi one I just finished now.
very good, a lot better than i could ever do....but the in the third one(vivi), vivi is a little hard to make out....it looks like 2 eyes, a blue collar line, and a beige smudge above the eyes....
They're not bad ;3 I think the first's the best, works pretty well except for the text. I can't really read it, but from what I can make out the font doesn't really flow. For the second one, not too fond of the foggy lightening at the right. It's not very clear and doesn't bring much to the sig. ...That's how I personally see it. Also the text is a major no-no. >_> First of all it's unreadable and secondly, I think the placement should be changed. Maybe changing the color to the same yellow of the robo dude and placing it on the left, it is a little deserted there. Relatively simple...but I think more work could go into this, it lacks a little still. Maybe only having one Vivi and really playing with the lightening/contrast better will improve it.
Yeah, just noticed that now. Thanks for that. I didn't noticed I over-smudged that one. Well, I was gonig for a more different style than what I usually do. But I'm pretty proud of that Vivi one, and the Party King Sora tag too. The Bumblebee was experimentation, and I don't like it so much. Thanks for pointing that out for me though. @ GIIIIIIIIIRLZ : D Thanks, I was looking at the ways it would look with more than 1 copy of a render. It's really plain. And yeah, the text on the first one isn't so flowy, but I only noticed that recently. I already dislike the second one so XD yeah. And since I don't have the heart to change them, I'll be done with more tags by tomorrow or the day after. See the improvements. Thanks you guys.
Yeah. I might make another tag with that render, see if I can do it better. I wanna use a Vivi tag for just a short time once at least XD
1. Excellent, everything is excellent. The lighting is great and the colors...Just EVERYTHING. Except one thing, the text. It could be blended more. 2. It's okay, but that big white light in the middle is kinda random and the top left area is kinda blank, there's nothing going on. But I like how the text blends. 3. The middle of the sig is really well put together, but once you start moving outward it gets blank on the left and the Vivi on the right is random.
Don't keep on smudging. That won't work on a sig >_> Try adding more brushes, and gradients. Effects work too. The text needs work as well. Other than that, your improving.
Yeah, about the brushes thing. Nobody actually got around to helping me with that, so I'm still clueless on how to download them. And I made a second version of the Vivi tag, I don't think it's one of my best but it's just a retry.
The first one looks extrememly beautifull! To say the thruth I don't see anything wrong about it. The effects are great as well as the background, good job ;) The second one is good as well but it doesn't beat the first one since the lighting effect on the left makes the image a bit blurry. The text it's a bit hard to see again but other than that it looks great. The third one looks good too but, once again, it looks too dark but vivi's eyes makes it better since they are yellow and they glow in the darkness. The text can be seen clearly too. :D Well I don't have much more to say since I'm not an expert at making sigs. All I can say is that you've been improving a lot since the first sig I saw. Don't ever quit at making them! Keep up the good work!!:action-smiley-030:
Thank you for that. *goes off to find new renders* It's hard to find a decent render to work with for me. I pick a render, and see how it flows. Most of the time it doesn't. Yeah. Thanks everybody for helping me out.
