Who here considers themselves to be a seasoned(experienced) rper?! In the rp I created, I see 1 liners, grammatical errors a plenty, spelling errors, and other things I can't seem to remember at this moment. It irks me....I'm not used to seeing that because at KHI, where I learned how to rp about 2 or so years ago, doesn't have much of that.
Hello all. This will be my very first fanfic submission here so uhh yeah. This story was first created as something to pass the time in a chat room. Actually, it started off with the second or third paragraph and I just added a beginning afterwards. This was when I was in 7th grade. Anyways...I do not own Sora, Riku, or any other copyrighted character of Square-Enix/Disney. Riku: If you did, our games would probably go to hell Des: Hey, I think I would do a pretty good job with Kingdom Hearts. Riku: Right... Des: I may just want to kill you off next time I write here. Riku: silence Des: Yeah, I thought so. _______________________________________________________ It was a still night in the world of Traverse Town. All was quiet except for the occasional clanking from the Gizmo Shop. Sora at the time was in the inn in the second district taking a much needed break and Riku to. Both were exhausted from fighting a new appearance of heartless throughout the worlds. Sora was not resting though; he could sense a dark presence stirring in the area. Heartless were afoot somewhere in the world. Knowing this, Sora became restless and left the inn and went outside into the still night. He hopped over the side of the railing swiftly and onto the bench below. Sora stepped off of the bench and into the middle of the small circular area in front of the Gizmo Shop. Then a strong gust of wind blew across the small world and whistled all throughout it. Sora listened intently for any sound of the heartless but heard nothing. Sora turned around and thought his mind was trying to play tricks on him. As he started to walk back to the inn, a Neo Shadow appeared out of the depths of the darkness and grabbed onto Sora. He struggled hard and tried to stab it with his keyblade but to no avail. Four more Neo Shadows appeared and also grabbed onto Sora. A pool of darkness appeared beneath Sora’s feet and he began to sink. Sora struggled harder but still could not overpower the heartless. He sank even further and was up to his head in the dark pool. He accepted what was going to happen and closed his eyes. His head became submerged into the pool which started to seal. Sora lost consciousness and had been completely consumed Sora awoke in the Great Hall of Hollow Bastion. There he was surrounded by a horde of heartless all looking like they were awaiting his command. Their eyes started to glow a bright yellow and Sora stood. He walked through the countless heartless, each one in his way stepping aside to let him through. He walked down a few stairs and saw Riku. Riku readied his blade and Sora drew the Kingdom Key which was now red and black. The two lunged at each other relentlessly and their blades clashed sending a number of sparks flying. Sora leapt into the air and tried to do an aerial attack on Riku. Riku quickly evaded the fierce attack and countered with an upward slash on Sora .In mid-air Sora moved quickly to the side and evaded the attack and hit the floor slightly. The two fighters stared each other down and their two auras began to emit a radiant glow. Riku's was a gold to yellow shine while Sora's was as black as night, almost like dark matter. The heartless steadily backed away and the two lunged at each other again and the force from the attack knocked both of the fighters backwards. Riku and Sora leapt high into the air. Sora used the attack Ragnarok while Riku used Dark Firaga. The two fierce attacks collided and created a blinding light…. The battle seemed to be over at that moment because Sora had vanished soon after the light had diminished. Riku was left sprawled on the cold stone floor unconscious. Three Shadow heartless wriggled there way up to Riku and carried him off into a dungeon far below the surface of Hollow Bastion. There Riku awoke in a daze feeling drained of all his strength. He stumbled around a bit and found his way to a stone wall behind him. He searched for a small opening and the found nothing. He then slumped to the floor and felt a sinking sensation beneath him. There was a small swirling hole in the floor that looked like a heartless had been there before. Possibly the remnants of a portal a heartless used to put him there. Thinking he nothing to lose, he dove into the hole and found himself back in Traverse Town in an instant. He was in the First District in front of the Accessory Shop once owned by Cid. Behind him came a voice. “You know….Mickey said you’d be back here.†Riku turned around to see Leon standing in front if him. “Huh?†Riku said somewhat confused and then turned around. â€Who are you?†“My name is Leon and you are Riku right?†“Yeah, but how did Mickey knew I was gonna be here and why did he send you?†“I’m Mickey’s best messenger and strongest. But that’s not the point here. Mickey had said that Sora has now become evil correct?†“Well he did seem strange earlier. It was almost as if his heart was consumed completely like darkness. Did Mickey say how that had happened?†“No, but he did say that Sora is lost forever….†“What?! You’ve got to be kiddin me. There’s no way Sora would lose his heart to darkness so easily.†“Its true, but this is no regular darkness. You see, Mickey told me that before Ansem disappeared after being hit by the light from Kingdom Hearts, Ansem planted a “seed†in Sora’s heart. The seed sprouted when he accepted his fate when he was being sucked into the darkness. Ansem is gone but his seed remains.†“So how do I get rid of this “seed†thing?†“You must regain your ability to use a keyblade.†“What?†“You have to be able to use a keyblade again.†“How would I go about doing that?†“Beats me, Mickey never said anything about how to get it back.†“Great….so now what?†“I suggest you think about what you’re going to do to get your keyblade back. And after you do, you won’t be able to fight Sora immediately afterwards.†“Why not?†“Because you will have to first find a way to weaken the seed’s grip on Sora heart. Think hard. This is the only information I have for you. “Well thanks….†And with that Leon proceeded towards the world gate and vanished. Riku went back into the Inn in the Second district and sat down on the floor in the hallway going back through all his memories. Riku thought long and hard about how to re-obtain a keyblade. Then he had found it. Riku remembered that when he had gained the dark keyblade Heart Unlocker, it took a great amount of dark energy. So obtaining a keyblade must require a large amount of light energy. Although he had an idea how to find a source of light energy of that great abundance, he only knew of one place that could supply that much light energy. Kingdom Hearts was the only solution but that had been sealed by Sora. So Riku had to find another solution. The moogles had been pretty good at crafting extraordinary items of power, so they could possibly construct an item composed of light in a physical state. Riku stood up and walked out of the inn and into the First District. From there he walked into the moogle synthesis shop. He walked over to the main moogle Synthesizer and asked if such an item could be made. The moogle replied simply with the answer, “yes.†“So what types of things do you need to craft this thing with?†Riku said. “Well, I need seven items. All of them are different. Fang of Cerberus, Crystal Shiva, Horn of Ixion, Claw of Fenrir, Eye of Leviathan, Hilt of Masamune, and the Scale of Bahamut. “Well where can I find all of these?†“The Fang of Cerberus is just as its name states, it is the fang of Cerberus. I will give you the other locations after you bring this item to me.†“Right…so I guess I’m off to Olympus or rather the Underworld. See ya.†Riku left the Synthesis Shop and made his way towards the world exit. Before leaving, he summoned his Gummi Ship and sped of towards Olympus. It only took Riku a few moments to reach the world of Olympus. He walked through the large gate of the world which was customary for most worlds. There he saw a lush, green landscape and off to the side in a distant corner lie a large opening to a cave. Riku figured that that was the entrance the Underworld. He walked into the cave and all was bright at first and as he delved deeper he came across more and more darkness. There were no souls here however, only small shadow heartless that Riku disposed of swiftly. After at least five miles of walking, Riku came across another cave. This one seemed to be much smaller. As he came closer, to the cave within the cave, he heard a gruff breathing sound of something large….something monstrous. The creature seemed to have awoken now because the breathing had lightened. There was a small tremor as it stood and it walked out of its den looking starved and beastly. Cerberus had awoken and wanted fresh flesh. Riku summoned his faithful blade Souleater from the depths of the unknown and was prepared for battle. Cerberus charged forward firing dark energy blasts with all three heads. Riku dodged each blast and deflected the last one with his sword and rolled underneath the rabid beast. Cerberus’ heads started to excrete a sort of acidic saliva from their mouths and Riku stabbed its underside making it flinch slightly. The demonic dog knew that his meal was underneath him and created a shockwave with its massive weight and threw Riku out from under him. Riku retaliated with a leap towards the the head farthest to the left and did a swift slash on its right eye. He then followed that up with a fierce kick to the side of it face. Before he hit the ground, Cerberus smacked Riku into the wall with its massive paw. Riku became immobilized for a moment and came to right before Cerberus was about to stomp him. Riku jumped to the side and lept into the air and slashed the thigh of its front right leg making it collapse on its side. The head nearest to Riku turned to him and barked loudly at him. “Hey buddy. Learn to brush you teeth in the morning!†Cerberus regained its strength and stood again and tried to bite at Riku with all three of its head and then immediately upon missing five or six times it blasted Riku and he flew back and hit the wall. “Wow! You’re not such a dumb mutt after all! I guess you can teach can old dog new tricks!†Cerberus bellowed a deep and sinister roar and charged towards Riku at its full speed. Riku lept high into the air and Cerberus crashed directly into the wall. Riku propelled himself downwards while holding his blade directly down so that it would pierce the beast’s middle head. Riku dropped going at a very high speed and came down into the beast’s head silencing its middle head. The power and speed of the attack cause an earthquake that sent a large boulder falling from the rock crag ceiling and onto the two remaining heads but Riku avoided the boulder by simply stepping back a little and watched the bolder crush the two heads and silence Cerberus for what seemed to be forever. Riku jumped off of the dogs’ neck and onto the rock littered floor and stepped over to one of the heads. “Alright….that was a very, very stupid dog. I’ll just borrow one of its many fangs." Riku bent over and snatched out the largest fang that Cerberus had and started walking away from the limp body. And with that, Riku started making his way back up through the Underworld. “How much dumber could that dog have gotten?†Out of the hellish prison Riku had started to sense a very odd presence nearby. He could not pin-point the location but knew it was very close. Then all movement and sound ceased. The air became still and then, there was complete and utter silence. Riku turned around to look back at the entrance of the Underworld and caught the glimpse of some large figure. As he turned back around there was a large shadow like figure looming off in the distance. Six glowing yellow eyes is the only thing that could be made out. In the blink of an eye, the shadow vanished and everything sprung into life again. Riku stood puzzled for a few minutes before making his way back to his Gummi Ship. Once inside, Riku sped off back to Traverse Town for the next item location. Upon entering the Synthesis shop he was immediately greeted by the same moogle from before. “Hello! I see you have the fang yes?†“Yeah…so where’s the next item located?†“Well …umm…I think its on the place called Arctic Hollow…†“What do you mean you think? You have to know its exact location!†“Sorry…It’s been a long time since I remember seeing Shiva… but she must be there!†“If she isn’t there… terrible things might happen to you the next time we meet….†As Riku left the Shop a voice called out to him. Riku looked around and saw no one. “Wha? Who called me?†“Up here.†Riku turned around and looked up to see Cloud sitting on the Synthesis Shop rooftop. “You’re about to go fight Shiva right?†Cloud said as he jumped off the roof and landed lightly on the ground. “Yeah…how did you know? Is Mickey spying on me or something? How do you guys keep finding me like this?†“Heh…That’s not the point. If you want to fight Shiva you’ll need this face mask.†Cloud handed Riku a furry looking face mask and pocketed it. “What’s this for?†“You want to be able to breathe properly will you’re fighting in fridgid air right?†“Yeah…I guess.†“Well that’s all. Good luck…you’ll need it….hehehe.†“What was that Cloud?†“It was nothing. I must go now. Goodbye.†Then Cloud disappeared in a blue light. “What was that all about?†Riku hopped inside his Gummi Ship and made his way towards his next destination. From what he could see, the surface off the world was completely frozen over. In the middle was a large castle, which also looked frozen over. That was the most likely place for Shiva to be. As Riku landed his Gummi Ship immediately started to freeze. Riku left the cockpit as quickly as he possibly could and ran towards the towering ice palace. As he was run he slipped the mask onto his face and cut through the blinding blizzard. There seemed to be no traces of life on the world at all. Then Riku was stopped by four Heartless. There were not like any Riku had seen before. They wore Light blue chest plates and greaves, and wielded two ice blades on each arm. Their heads were covered by a knight helmet the same color as the rest of their armor. They were also about the same size as Neo Heartless. They bore the heartless symbol on their chest plates. They did not move for many minutes until a swift gust of snow swept before Rku. The heartless where no where to be seen. Riku turned around and then turned back around to find himself surround by the four heartless. Each one had one of its blades pointing at Riku’s throat. At the exact same time, each heartless drew back its blade and thrust forward at Riku’s neck. He ducked and narrowly avoided being struck by all four blades. The in one movement, Riku wielded his faithful blade SoulEater and sliced the heartless to his left in half and then turning into smoke. The three remaining heartless leapt back and charged at Riku. Each one attacked him at the same time forcing Riku to block and evade six swords. The one that seemed to be the leader squared off against Riku as the other two were disposed of. It slashed at him from both sides with the blades but Riku caught the blades with his sword and retaliated by deflected the swords and blasting it with Dark Firaga. The heartless had no other choice but to block the attack with an X- block thus causing the swords to shatter on impact. While the creature was vulnerable, Riku charged and impaled the creature in its mid-section and destroyed it. He then continued on to the palace of ice. The entrance to the palace was two gigantic doors of solid ice. A very large hole was blown into one of them by Dark Firaga and Riku walked through it. What was to be seen was two staircases at either side of the castle that lead to the very top of it. In between were various corridors and chambers. Riku dashed up the stairs losing his balance from time to time because the floor was also solid ice and was very slick. He had reached the topmost chamber in a matter of minutes and opened the chamber door with a quickness. In front of him lye a large balcony with a throne at the tip. There sat the ice queen Shiva who stood from her throne. Her skin tinged blue, her hair a deeper, darker blue and piercing eyes of the same color. She wore a half dress and a top slightly darker than her skin. She began to speak seconds after she rose. “So you have arrived young one? You come seeking my crystal correct?†“Yeah. Could you hand it over or do I have to take it by force?†“Isure, taking this from me will not be an easy task. Are you prepared?†“Quit talking and start fighting!†“As you wish…†_____________________________________________________________________________ Authors note: I'm assuming all of you reading this have played KH1 or 2, so I'm not going to bother describing characters already revealed in them. Btw, the story takes place prior to KH2 so everyone is younger and has their original look as well as Cloud and Yuffie...and everyone else.Review!
Hurricane Academy, an extraordinary school of excellence. Here, students may learn the many ways of the warrior, ninja, magician, and many other things. Most of the students that leave this school leave as masters in the arts that they have chosen. Though the path that they choose upon leaving, rather it be good or evil, is left entirely up to them. Outside of the schools walls, but still on campus, lies a vast forest to the east. To the west is the open sea with a long and beautiful beach. There are islands off in the distance that have their own climate and unique ecosystems. To the south is a series of canyons and valleys void of much of any life except for a few birds and lizards that roost and nest their. The north contains a vast expanse of mountain ranges with some peaks reaching up into the heavens themselves. The school sits at the center of all of this. ======= Short description ehh? What more could I say? Ok heres what you do, since this RP is mostly a romance/action adventure, there is fighting, love and all of that stuff. But if you wish to be a loner and just want to fight, fine by me. Be whatever you feel because like a highschool, everyone has their own preferences. This RP starts on the first day of the first semester. Rules: -No God Modding -No PKing (player-killing) -Romance is highly Encouraged(but no overly intimate things) -Use "OOC:" when you need to say something not about the rp -Don't Overdo the Violence. Keep it somewhat moderate. -Be literate! -Do Have Fun! -Post "Hurricane Academy is teh best!" at the top of your template if you've read all of the rules. Template Name: Age: (keep it within 14-19 since this is a highscool) Gender: Appearance: (be as descriptive as possible) Personality: Dorm Number: (pick between 100-200,300-400,500-600 and you will have a roommate or two! It can't be male and female) Major: (pick two- ex. alchemy, swordsmanship, ninjutsu) Schedule: (six classes-must correspond with your major. include your lunch period as well) And thats it! I need as many members as possible so join join join! We Are Still Accepting Members!!! ========= My Character Name: Yamiryu Higenki (nick: Ryu) Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v215/Dark_StarX/png07.png Personality: Ryu is somewhat kept to himself but can be outgoing. Ryu is a little shy when talking to someone of the opposite gender as well. Ryu is also a dedicated worker when it comes to his studies and is self-disciplined. Dorm Number: 120 Major: Ninjustu and Weapon Usage Schedule: Swordplay Stealth Tool Crafting P.E. (yep we still have P.E.) Human Anatomy ----Lunch History of Sword Arts and Techniques
Hara Ga Kuroi Akuma translation: Black Demon In a society named Arunathia where demons live along side humans in perfect harmony in cities, there are also villages in which some of these demons are sealed within humans themselves. The act is tradition throughout the entire world and was said to have started thousands of years ago when the first human to demon contact was said to have first occurred. The tradition is quite common, though an incident occurred no more than at least one hundred years prior to the present day and time. Within a secluded, almost forgotten, village, there was held the ceremony in which children first receive the demon that would be a part of them until the day in which they both die. Eggs are presented before the children and they approach each one to see whether or not it will hatch for them. When an egg does hatch, the child takes the demon away from the other group and joins another side group for children who have also obtained they're demon.Each child that has a demon sealed within it gains some traits and abilities of the demon that inhabits them. The more power a person draws from a demon, the more they begin to resemble the demon they contain. After each child has received his or her new hatched demon, a second ceremony commences named "The Sealing". A group of elders in the village then perform a chant before the children and they're demon recedes into the body of its chosen human. Almost all of these demons are good natured and very rarely are they malevolent. Though this is what happened on the incident. A demon had chosen a very odd and peculiar child, one who seemed dark and cold, and was sealed within him. Normally, the consciousness of both beings residing in the body have equal influence and one is not supposed to dominate the other. This demon however, did. Each child that has a demon sealed within it gains some traits and abilities of the demon that inhabits them. The more power a person draws from a demon, the more they begin to resemble the demon they contain. The boy had become possessed by the demon and his body changed to more resemble the demon. A rampage commenced directly afterwards. The village had been destroyed and all of its inhabitants killed. The boy now moved onto other villages and did the same.There were few villages left intact after only one day after the demon's awakening. The demon then proceeded on to attack the major cities around the area. During all of this death and destruction, the demon evolved and grew more powerful and completely devoured the young boy's mind leaving only the demon in its place. The chaos spread past the area of the demon's birth and traveled to different nations, wreaking to same havoc and death as what he did with all the other areas. The world's destruction continued for exactly one year and then suddenly ceased after the demon's abrupt disappearance. The result of the attack left only half of the world's original and human and demon populations. The name of this ungodly powerful demon was simply, Yami. Years went on and the world recovered slowly. New cities now stand over the ruins of the ones previously destroyed by Yami. Villages also began to sprout up and the ceremonies began again. No new precautions have been taken however, to prevent a second incident. Since there haven't been any problems, people have dismissed the fact that Yami still lives. He was never killed, he only disappeared. There are now reports of frequent earthquakes in the vicinity around where Yami was last witnessed attacking before his disappearance. People choose to ignore these reports for they believe it is only the media trying to scare them. Little do they know, Yami's second coming is drawing near and he had a legion of other demons who are also now becoming active. _________________________ Alright I'm done typing the story. Now to present....The Rules!!!! -You must be mostly Literate! I'm not going to stress this that much, but I would appreciate it if you were literate. -No godmodding! I don't want everyone running around destroying cities or other demons or humans with no limitations. Or controlling other peoples characters to make them jump off a ledge or something. -No PKing! Please...don't kill of another person character without that person's permission. -No overly foul Language! Cursing someone out is not okay! Neither is swearing every time your character speaks. -Romance is allowed and encouraged! But keep it PG13! I don't want to see any scenes that would make someone's grandma cry. -If you have read these said rules post "YamiRyuu Akuma" in your character template. ________________________ The Template! You should all knows these are expected and required, but sometimes dreaded. This is for a Human Character Name: (First and Last) Age: Gender: Appearance: (at least 1 or 1.5 paragraphs if typed) Appearance2: (How your character looks when they start utilizing the power of their demon) Personality: (1-2 paragraphs) Bio: (I would appreciate if it was about 2-3 paragraphs. 2 is good though) Abilities/Powers: Demon's Name: Gender: Appearance: (should be similar to your Appearance2) Personality: Elemental Energy: (Fire,wood, shadow, water, wind, light, earth, etc...you get it right? Should tie into your human's abilities and powers) This is for a Demon character Name: Age: Gender: Appearance: Personality: Bio: Elemental Energy: Abilities/Powers: And thats it!!! Note: Remember to specify if your character is human or demon!
I made this as a result of boredom. Was gonna turn it into a fanfic, which I still might do but I want to see if anyone is interested in the rp version first. Btw, I really have no high hopes in this. Just posting it so it can be out there. _______________________________ The World, a wonderful online game in which players can enter a virtual world and go on amazing adventures with millions of people all around the globe. It's creator, CC Corp, has put in so much effort into this project to make it as perfect as possible. Having gone so well with it's initial launch, The World has been going strong for several years. At this point and time, CC Corp has started a special event available to all players of the world. They are promised to receive a special item of unknown origin but of tremendous power. What is odd about the event, is that are no details regarding how to start or complete the event. However, CC Corp did not officially sponsor this event. They have no records of the start in their system, nor do they know what the prize is. Upon discovering this 'anomaly', CC Corp attempted to stop the event, the event known as "The Twilight Arc". They failed and caused a massive server malfunction in the process. Since the Event had not caused any problems, CC Corp stopped pursuing the issue. That is until more 'anomalies' began appearing. They appeared to be rifts in The World. Space, ripped open, that sucked everything into it, including characters and portions of The World's data. Anything that went in, did not come out. The PCs(player characters) that were sucked in, had their real-life counterparts fall almost immediately into a coma. Again, CC Corp tried to shut the event down and failed, so they shut down the game for a short period of time when they had lost a significant amount of their member base. They Re-opened The World, assuring people that they had solved all of the problems. It worked, until again, more problems arose. Each server had seemingly merged together creating one massive mega server. All the major cities, gathered into place...Then another major problem developed. The appearance of creatures called Viraza. They appear out of the many rifts now popping up all over The World now and resemble small dragons with the aura that of Dopplegangers. They themselves have the same affect on PCs as the rifts, sending people into comas. Now with the population of The World dwindling on the edge of nothing, few stand against the threat of the the Viraza and the rifts, now called Corrses. Why is something like this happening in The World? Who or what is causing it?! What benefit do they gain from this? The handful of people left in the world are trying to put and end to the chaos and destruction. All of these questions will be answered in due time, but at great cost. ~All Basic RP Rules Apply~ Btw, post ARC in your character template to let me know that you have read thus far. Character Template Username: //the name you will be using for your character in the World// User's Age: //Your characters age// Gender: //Is your character a boy or a girl?// Class: // Look here .hack character classes - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and look under The World R2 // Skills: //Do you have any skills?// Level: //what is your current level? no people over 150 as the level cap is 255// Race: //Beast, Human, etc.// About the user: //About your character// What the user looks like: //what does you character look like? (Can be either word description or picture)// For example of the characters, heres mine: Username: Des Synn User's Age: 15 Gender: Male Class: PKK Adept Rogue - Twin Blade - Blade Brandier - Flick Reaper Skills: All Basic Skills for the 3 Classes and Ghost Falcon for Twin Blade Level: 110 Race: Human About the user: Des, as he is known now, was a ferocious and violent PK, known as D Synn, at one time who later changed his ways when he learned of the chaos in The World. He is know seen mostly on the bridge of Mac Anu. What the user looks like: His hair is quite spiky and blue, and it flows back down his neck. His eyes are emerald green and he has two triangular markings on his cheeks. He wears an open black and red vest and flowing black pants. His shoes are just plain brown boots.
Hey I'm Des. I just came over here from KHI and was looking to have some fun over here ^^
